Anyone want to give me their opinion on my letters to my kids from the jolly old fella. These will be in the box they will be getting this weekend that will tell them we are going to WDW in 26 days!

I would love your thoughts.
Here is ds's age 6-
Dear

,
I am writing to tell you about a very special Christmas gift your Mom & Dad and I have been working on for you and your sister. I received your letter awhile back asking me to send your family to Disney World for Christmas. I decided that since you are doing so well in school I would do my best to grant your Christmas wish. I could not do it all on my own so I asked your Mom & Dad to help me out. So this gift is from your Mom, Dad, & me. Mickey and the gang have also decided to help out by sending you a few gifts and giving you more once you get to Disney World, of course that's only if you stay on the Nice List. Read the enclosed invitation to see when you are going to Disney World. I will also bring you more gifts on Christmas Eve at your house just like always. I hope you enjoy your trip, expect lots of little surprises to come your way. Be a good boy and give Mickey a high-five for me.
Love,
PS- Good job being goalie on Friday!
Here is dd's age 2-
Dear

,
I am writing to tell you about a very special Christmas gift your Mommy & Daddy and I have been working on for you and your brother. I heard you wanted to go to Disney World for Christmas. I decided that since you are doing such a good job learning to use the potty I would do my best to grant your Christmas wish. I could not do it all on my own so I asked your Mommy & Daddy to help me out. So this gift is from your Mommy, Daddy, & me. Mickey and the gang have also decided to help out by sending you a few gifts and giving you more once you get to Disney World, of course that's only if you stay on the Nice List. Look for the invitation in the box to see when you are going to Disney World. I will also bring you more gifts on Christmas Eve at your house just like always. I hope you have fun on your trip, expect lots of little surprises to come your way. Be a good girl and give Ariel a kiss for me.
Love,
PS- Keep those pull-ups dry!