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Okay, this is a story I am starting to write. this is the first Chapter, and I know exactly where it is going, but I want to know if you like it and if I should keep writing. The name of it is Red, White, and Beautiful Icy Blue Eyes. I'm not concerned with the grammar or spelling right now, just the content. Thanks!!!
*YES!!!! Finally!! I need to go call Janine.* As soon as we heard my dad was the new President of the United States, those were the thoughts going through my mind; I need to call my best friend. So you’re probably wondering who I am. Well my name is Tori, just Tori, contrary to popular belief, it is not short for anything. It is the same name that is on my birth certificate. I am Tori Belleview and I am17 years old and 5 foot 2 inches tall with beautiful brown hair with natural blonde and red highlights, sometimes in the right light my hair looks red or blonde, I also have big brown eyes that I constantly get complimented on and an athletic build because I play volleyball and I love to run. I was born in CT to the most amazing parents, Henry and Elizabeth Belleview. When I was two I met Janine, she has been my best friend ever since, she is 5 months younger than me but she is in a grade lower than I am, never the less we get along amazingly, we have never gotten in to a fight with each other our entire lives, we are practically like sisters. I mean when I moved down to Texas during my freshman year in high school, her and her dad moved down just a couple months later, so we still live in the same town. In high school I started going to a private boarding school, but that is also when my dad decided he wanted to run for president, so we moved down south for my moms job and I had to change schools. Now I go to a private school in Texas and Janine goes to the same school, we are closer than ever and I don’t know what I would do with out her. So the day that we found out who would be president of course the first thing I thought was to call my best friend.
Ring, ring..
Janine: well hello miss president’s daughter!
Me: Hey!!! Oh, my God!!! I can’t believe it!!!
Janine: I know you’re going all the way up to DC! (she said almost in tears)
Me: Dude, you know you can come visit me all the time!
Janine: yea, but it won’t be the same.
Me: Yea, I know. But look my dad is calling me, so I’ll talk to you later. Love ya!
Janine: Love you too.
I went into the den where my mom and dad were, oh, sorry did I forget to mention that I don’t have any siblings? Well, I am an only child, a VERY spoiled only child, I’m daddy’s little girl and I get everything I want and can pretty much do whatever I want. So anyway, I went into the den and my parents didn’t look too happy.
“Hey darling! Have a seat,” My dad said. So I sat down across from them on a chair. Then my dad started,” we have something to tell you.” “Okay, shoot.” I replied. “Well first of all you know now that I am going to be the president we are all going to have to have more protection, so I have gotten you a body guard, he is pretty young, so hopefully you will still be able to have some fun.” My dad said carefully. My head fell and he obviously saw because he quickly said, “I’m sorry sweetie, but I can’t do anything about it. And that isn’t even the worst news I have.” I looked up at him questioningly like what could be any worse then what he already told me, “we have invited the current president and his family over for the weekend, they will be arriving tomorrow.”
I think I just went delusional. He saw my face and said, “I’m so sorry sweetheart, but I have to do it, I know you don’t like their son Greg, but it is polite and just the thing that I am supposed to do.” I got angry and retaliated with, “Are you kidding me? The McKenzie’s? Their son is such a jerk to me! no scratch that, he is just a jerk in general, he hits on everything that moves! But mostly just me!!! God I can’t stand him!” then my mom butted in and said, “We know he makes you uncomfortable sweetie but we have to do this, it is just what you do in this situation, we will try our hardest to keep him as far away from you as possible.” My dad desperate to change the subject said, “So would you like to meet Josh, your body guard?” “Sure, then I’m going out with Janine.” I replied.
A tall man with dark brown hair and dark almost black eyes came into the room. “Tori, this is Josh, Josh this is my wonderful daughter Tori.” My father introduced us. “Hey, so you’re the lucky guy that gets to follow me around. Hope you know how to have fun!” I said as I left the room to get read to go shopping with Janine.
After getting changed into a pink halter top and white shorts I went down stairs to say goodbye to my parents and pick up my new pain in the *** body guard. “Okay josh get in.” I said getting into my brand new pink 2006 BMW M3 convertible (can you tell my favorite color is pink? Hehe). “they make these in hot pink?!?!” Josh asked surprised. I replied, “of course not!...... I got it customized.” On the ten minute ride to Janine’s I decided to get to know my new ‘escort’. “So Josh, tell me about yourself. Do you have a girl friend?” “Wow,” Josh replied a little taken aback, “Um, yea, actually I’m thinking about asking her to marry me soon.” “Cool, how old are you?” I asked keeping the conversation going. “I am 25.” He replied. “Wow, you’re young! Do you play any sports?” I asked. “Yea, I play soccer and lacrosse.” He said with a small chuckle. “So why are you a body guard? Have you been doing it for long?” I asked sincerely interested. “Well, I always liked the idea of saving people, but I didn’t really want to work with a team so much, so my parents suggested being a body guard. And I have been a body guard for about four years, and I have had about 5 clients including you.” He replied with a smile on his face. “So where do you like to hang out? What do you like to do? Do you play any sports? Are you happy that your dad is the president?” he asked almost like a reporter. “Damn! Enough questions?” I replied with a small laugh. ”well I like to go to the mall a lot, I go to the movies, I am constantly at parties. I play volleyball, and I used to play field hockey, but I do like to run a lot, it keeps my mind off things. Yea, I’m glad he is president; he has wanted this for a while. And I can deal with the whole life being threatened and paparazzi thing as long as my dad is happy. Plus it helps to have someone like him to watch if I want to be president some day.” “So you want to be President some day?” He asked intrigued. “Yep, that is my life long goal, I am going to become a criminal defense attorney and then run for president.” I replied. “Wow you are very ambitious.” He said and that is when we pulled up to 842 Regan Lane, aka Janine’s house.
“Be right out Josh.” I called to Josh as I ascended the steps to Janine’s front door. I didn’t knock, just walked in, it was like a second home to me and the Samson’s are like my second family. “Hey!!! I’m home!!!” I yelled as I closed the front door behind me. Janine came sprinting down the stairs and jumped on me pushing me to the ground. “Where is Gary?” I asked as I got up. “Oh, he is getting dressed; he’ll be down in a minute.” Janine answered. Gary is Janine’s boyfriend, they have been going out for almost a year and I couldn’t be happier for them, because this is the first nice guy that Janine has been out with and also the first one that I actually liked and would hang out with. I heard some loud noises and I looked up to see Gary bounding down the stairs towards us with a huge smile on his face. “So, what are we doing today?” he asked. “Well, I am working on my dad to get tickets to the Harry Potter Premiere for me, you, Janine, and of course my new body guard. So I thought we would go dress shopping.” I replied. “Sounds good!” Gary said as we left the house. We got to the car and I introduced them to Josh and then we were off to the mall. “So, Tori are you going to Justin’s party tomorrow night?” Janine asked me, because we always go to his parties. “I don’t know if I can.” I said. “Why not? He has the best parties and you know it isn’t a party with out you! Justin would be so heart broken, you know he loves you. And plus it’s like the last one before you leave.” Janine tried to convince me. “I know, you don’t have to convince me to go, I really want to, but the McKenzie’s are coming over for the weekend, they are flying in tomorrow and I have to deal with Greg. And I’m not sure if my dad will let me. But I can always use the guilt thing; I mean it always gets him. ‘Daddy, you’re making me move away from all my friends.’ Or ‘daddy I have to deal with Greg for the whoooole weekend, don’t you think I deserve just this one night?’ I’ll be there don’t worry.” I said getting more confident in myself as I kept talking. Janine and I went into our favorite store, it wasn’t designer name, but we knew no one else would have anything like our outfits. And we quickly found what we were looking for. I dropped Janine and Gary off and then went back home to work my magic with my father.
thanks for reading!!!
*YES!!!! Finally!! I need to go call Janine.* As soon as we heard my dad was the new President of the United States, those were the thoughts going through my mind; I need to call my best friend. So you’re probably wondering who I am. Well my name is Tori, just Tori, contrary to popular belief, it is not short for anything. It is the same name that is on my birth certificate. I am Tori Belleview and I am17 years old and 5 foot 2 inches tall with beautiful brown hair with natural blonde and red highlights, sometimes in the right light my hair looks red or blonde, I also have big brown eyes that I constantly get complimented on and an athletic build because I play volleyball and I love to run. I was born in CT to the most amazing parents, Henry and Elizabeth Belleview. When I was two I met Janine, she has been my best friend ever since, she is 5 months younger than me but she is in a grade lower than I am, never the less we get along amazingly, we have never gotten in to a fight with each other our entire lives, we are practically like sisters. I mean when I moved down to Texas during my freshman year in high school, her and her dad moved down just a couple months later, so we still live in the same town. In high school I started going to a private boarding school, but that is also when my dad decided he wanted to run for president, so we moved down south for my moms job and I had to change schools. Now I go to a private school in Texas and Janine goes to the same school, we are closer than ever and I don’t know what I would do with out her. So the day that we found out who would be president of course the first thing I thought was to call my best friend.
Ring, ring..
Janine: well hello miss president’s daughter!
Me: Hey!!! Oh, my God!!! I can’t believe it!!!
Janine: I know you’re going all the way up to DC! (she said almost in tears)
Me: Dude, you know you can come visit me all the time!
Janine: yea, but it won’t be the same.
Me: Yea, I know. But look my dad is calling me, so I’ll talk to you later. Love ya!
Janine: Love you too.
I went into the den where my mom and dad were, oh, sorry did I forget to mention that I don’t have any siblings? Well, I am an only child, a VERY spoiled only child, I’m daddy’s little girl and I get everything I want and can pretty much do whatever I want. So anyway, I went into the den and my parents didn’t look too happy.
“Hey darling! Have a seat,” My dad said. So I sat down across from them on a chair. Then my dad started,” we have something to tell you.” “Okay, shoot.” I replied. “Well first of all you know now that I am going to be the president we are all going to have to have more protection, so I have gotten you a body guard, he is pretty young, so hopefully you will still be able to have some fun.” My dad said carefully. My head fell and he obviously saw because he quickly said, “I’m sorry sweetie, but I can’t do anything about it. And that isn’t even the worst news I have.” I looked up at him questioningly like what could be any worse then what he already told me, “we have invited the current president and his family over for the weekend, they will be arriving tomorrow.”
I think I just went delusional. He saw my face and said, “I’m so sorry sweetheart, but I have to do it, I know you don’t like their son Greg, but it is polite and just the thing that I am supposed to do.” I got angry and retaliated with, “Are you kidding me? The McKenzie’s? Their son is such a jerk to me! no scratch that, he is just a jerk in general, he hits on everything that moves! But mostly just me!!! God I can’t stand him!” then my mom butted in and said, “We know he makes you uncomfortable sweetie but we have to do this, it is just what you do in this situation, we will try our hardest to keep him as far away from you as possible.” My dad desperate to change the subject said, “So would you like to meet Josh, your body guard?” “Sure, then I’m going out with Janine.” I replied.
A tall man with dark brown hair and dark almost black eyes came into the room. “Tori, this is Josh, Josh this is my wonderful daughter Tori.” My father introduced us. “Hey, so you’re the lucky guy that gets to follow me around. Hope you know how to have fun!” I said as I left the room to get read to go shopping with Janine.
After getting changed into a pink halter top and white shorts I went down stairs to say goodbye to my parents and pick up my new pain in the *** body guard. “Okay josh get in.” I said getting into my brand new pink 2006 BMW M3 convertible (can you tell my favorite color is pink? Hehe). “they make these in hot pink?!?!” Josh asked surprised. I replied, “of course not!...... I got it customized.” On the ten minute ride to Janine’s I decided to get to know my new ‘escort’. “So Josh, tell me about yourself. Do you have a girl friend?” “Wow,” Josh replied a little taken aback, “Um, yea, actually I’m thinking about asking her to marry me soon.” “Cool, how old are you?” I asked keeping the conversation going. “I am 25.” He replied. “Wow, you’re young! Do you play any sports?” I asked. “Yea, I play soccer and lacrosse.” He said with a small chuckle. “So why are you a body guard? Have you been doing it for long?” I asked sincerely interested. “Well, I always liked the idea of saving people, but I didn’t really want to work with a team so much, so my parents suggested being a body guard. And I have been a body guard for about four years, and I have had about 5 clients including you.” He replied with a smile on his face. “So where do you like to hang out? What do you like to do? Do you play any sports? Are you happy that your dad is the president?” he asked almost like a reporter. “Damn! Enough questions?” I replied with a small laugh. ”well I like to go to the mall a lot, I go to the movies, I am constantly at parties. I play volleyball, and I used to play field hockey, but I do like to run a lot, it keeps my mind off things. Yea, I’m glad he is president; he has wanted this for a while. And I can deal with the whole life being threatened and paparazzi thing as long as my dad is happy. Plus it helps to have someone like him to watch if I want to be president some day.” “So you want to be President some day?” He asked intrigued. “Yep, that is my life long goal, I am going to become a criminal defense attorney and then run for president.” I replied. “Wow you are very ambitious.” He said and that is when we pulled up to 842 Regan Lane, aka Janine’s house.
“Be right out Josh.” I called to Josh as I ascended the steps to Janine’s front door. I didn’t knock, just walked in, it was like a second home to me and the Samson’s are like my second family. “Hey!!! I’m home!!!” I yelled as I closed the front door behind me. Janine came sprinting down the stairs and jumped on me pushing me to the ground. “Where is Gary?” I asked as I got up. “Oh, he is getting dressed; he’ll be down in a minute.” Janine answered. Gary is Janine’s boyfriend, they have been going out for almost a year and I couldn’t be happier for them, because this is the first nice guy that Janine has been out with and also the first one that I actually liked and would hang out with. I heard some loud noises and I looked up to see Gary bounding down the stairs towards us with a huge smile on his face. “So, what are we doing today?” he asked. “Well, I am working on my dad to get tickets to the Harry Potter Premiere for me, you, Janine, and of course my new body guard. So I thought we would go dress shopping.” I replied. “Sounds good!” Gary said as we left the house. We got to the car and I introduced them to Josh and then we were off to the mall. “So, Tori are you going to Justin’s party tomorrow night?” Janine asked me, because we always go to his parties. “I don’t know if I can.” I said. “Why not? He has the best parties and you know it isn’t a party with out you! Justin would be so heart broken, you know he loves you. And plus it’s like the last one before you leave.” Janine tried to convince me. “I know, you don’t have to convince me to go, I really want to, but the McKenzie’s are coming over for the weekend, they are flying in tomorrow and I have to deal with Greg. And I’m not sure if my dad will let me. But I can always use the guilt thing; I mean it always gets him. ‘Daddy, you’re making me move away from all my friends.’ Or ‘daddy I have to deal with Greg for the whoooole weekend, don’t you think I deserve just this one night?’ I’ll be there don’t worry.” I said getting more confident in myself as I kept talking. Janine and I went into our favorite store, it wasn’t designer name, but we knew no one else would have anything like our outfits. And we quickly found what we were looking for. I dropped Janine and Gary off and then went back home to work my magic with my father.
thanks for reading!!!
Oh my Gosh. It's Great! Keep up the good work!
