potc3:our story a fresh start!

[catycatcat4]

"arent you that girl that god kid naped?"one asked

 

[coolshannie]

she looked at them and said..

 

[catycatcat4]

"I wasnt kid naped"she said "i.....fell in love"she contued the next few weeks she was forsed too be a student no one in charge would let her go

 

[coolshannie]

sryy g2g bye

 

[catycatcat4]

one day miranda lost it she just broke down crying one night in her bed as tears fell onto her pillow "oh jack"she wisperd into thin air little did she know jack was on his way he was on his way up a hill on the side of a hill he made his way too the school but on the way he crept into the school and looked in every room until he found her crying into her pillow "love im here"he said she smiled at him as she stood up and made her way over too him she huged him jack tryed to kiss her but he stoped him "you still havent earned my trust back"she wisperd walking away and going back too bed jack went and sat down next too her "love im sorry i truley am"he said she started to cry on her pillow "im sorry i didnt realise how some thing so small would upset you"he said "that wasnt small at all you treeted me like dirt" she said looking at him "your some nice dirt then"he said trying to calm her she cryed on his sholder the next moarning the school girls where shocked to see jack in the room she rolled over and relized he was there she though she was just dreaming the girls where looking at her like she did some thing wrong






why dont we have the plot for a while be jack trying to get her trust back

 

[CASTAWAYCAYCUTIE]

miranda ignored the girls as she gently shook jack awake

 

[catycatcat4]

but he wasnt wakeing up she looked at him closely he wasnt even breathing!

 

[CASTAWAYCAYCUTIE]

JACK!" she yelled and started shaking him harder...

 

[catycatcat4]

"jack!"she said many times as tears started to fall from her eyes

 

[CASTAWAYCAYCUTIE]

but he didnt wake up...

"jakc!" miranda cried throwing her arms around him and crying into his chest "jack im sorry im sorry i have always loved you and always will!" she said willing him to wake up


i had him die like you said always bring him back and itll make interesting plot...mirnada was mad at him then he dies...mirandas gonna be really really sad...lol

 

[catycatcat4]

too make it even more dramatic we can have miranda be pregnant but the baby is born befor they get jack back (it can die as well) but i will leave it up too you



she cryed as she rested her head on his chest "how could i be mad at you jack l love you dont die"she said

 

[CASTAWAYCAYCUTIE]

ok but lets not have it die...or ...you know what...it could die. hmm...

miranda lay there crying when will came in to see where jack was the people on the pearl were worried that he didnt come back

 

[catycatcat4]

as miranda was there crying she took jack dead hand and plased on her stumic "youll never even get to know him little one"she said will was standing in the door way and said" jacks been gone for a weak"

 

[CASTAWAYCAYCUTIE]

"miranda, gather your things, we are leaving." and then...

 

[catycatcat4]

she looked up too him "hes not breathing"she said tearfully



another thing to make it dramadic they cant take jack body with them

 

[CASTAWAYCAYCUTIE]

ok

"come on miranda well take him and bury him at sea, where he would have wanted to." will said gently but then the headmisstress came in "you cant do that it will have to be examined and properly buried"

 

[catycatcat4]

"dont call him IT hes mine i can do what i want with him!" she shouted but every thing they said up set miranda worse so will had to force her to go back to the pearl

 

[CASTAWAYCAYCUTIE]

she buryed her head in his shulder sobbing and overcome with grief "will i never frogave him..i never said sorry...and now..hes...hes..gone...and i never said sorry! "

 

[catycatcat4]

the next few days she spent in her room crying haveing no idea what was going on beond that room she was barly eating too

 

[CASTAWAYCAYCUTIE]

hey guys ill brb i g2 get dressed and ready real quick. write if you can