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Yay! I finally got around to writing the second chapter of my fanfiction!
 
I moved, now we are over 1,000 miles away. I wonder how he is doing?

Oh well I guess that makes a little sense why you lost touch. It's just hard for me cuz I see her every day and I try to talk to her but it just never works.
 
Oh well I guess that makes a little sense why you lost touch. It's just hard for me cuz I see her every day and I try to talk to her but it just never works.

Do you start to talk and it doen't work, or do you think about talking and you decide not to?
 
Do you start to talk and it doen't work, or do you think about talking and you decide not to?
I try to talk to her but she never wants to. And it doesn't help that all her friends are annoying her about it so that makes her want to talk less.
 

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I think you mentioned it yesterday. So how was your trip? Where'd you go, what'd you do, where'd you stay?

It was good,, the first day we went to MK and the second day EPCOT. We stayed at All Star Sports, Basketball section.
 
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So I'm writing a story right now. Not for school or anything, just for fun. I don't have all the dealis clear in my head yet (like the antagonisht.. just have very vague details about him) but I started writing it anyway. Here's the first coupla paragraphs:

I burst out of the door and into what should've been the darkness of night. I paused for a moment, stunned by the flashy lights of an unfarmilliar city. I'm sure my current location crossed across my thoughts, but I pushed my curiosity back. I reminded my self I needed to get away, and fast.
I knew I didn't have much time before he caught up to me. Surely, by now, he'd know I'd escaped. For the first few minutes of my mad dash through the foreign city streets, the only sound I heard was my own footsteps, breathing, and the splashing of rain on the pavement.
However, I soon heard a heavier set of feet behind me. I didn't need to look over my shoulder to know he was behind me and gaining.
Under my breath, I muttered, "This is what I get for being impulsive and not planning ahead." I pushed myself to run faster.

That's about half of what I've written so far. Anyone have opinions? Constructive criticisms? Yes, I know I probably speeled things wrong but that's why they didn't pick me for the spelling bee. :rotfl2:

So happy! I hve tomorrow afternoon off from musical rehersal! :woohoo:
 
my bf wants to join the army. hes kidding right? i dont think i could handle that.
 
I like the All Stars. I'm determined to get into the Toy Story building.
 
I'm staying at All Star Music for the school portion of my trip. I remember staying therre in.. 2003, I think, and loving it. Can't wait! :hyper:
 
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