So I'm writing a story right now. Not for school or anything, just for fun. I don't have all the dealis clear in my head yet (like the antagonisht.. just have very vague details about him) but I started writing it anyway. Here's the first coupla paragraphs:
I burst out of the door and into what should've been the darkness of night. I paused for a moment, stunned by the flashy lights of an unfarmilliar city. I'm sure my current location crossed across my thoughts, but I pushed my curiosity back. I reminded my self I needed to get away, and fast.
I knew I didn't have much time before he caught up to me. Surely, by now, he'd know I'd escaped. For the first few minutes of my mad dash through the foreign city streets, the only sound I heard was my own footsteps, breathing, and the splashing of rain on the pavement.
However, I soon heard a heavier set of feet behind me. I didn't need to look over my shoulder to know he was behind me and gaining.
Under my breath, I muttered, "This is what I get for being impulsive and not planning ahead." I pushed myself to run faster.
That's about half of what I've written so far. Anyone have opinions? Constructive criticisms? Yes, I know I probably speeled things wrong but that's why they didn't pick me for the spelling bee.
So happy! I hve tomorrow afternoon off from musical rehersal!
