Honesty..

[tinkerbell12]

ok... here's my poem 4 skool that's due 2morro... sorry bout the lingo... really dont feel like typin well 2night...


My Home
By Emily
My home is special and unique.
It is quite entertaining,
We entertain ourselves when it is raining.
Our house can be quite a mess,
Sometimes as messy as a pig sty,
But it’ll always be clean through my eye.
The family is kind and friendly,
And usually pretty odd,
But they stick together like peas in a pod.
My house can be calm, but sometimes wild.
You may come, then leave with no sanity,
But my house is a great place to be.
Lots of people know about my home,
As a place of events and fun.
I know my house is number one!

 

[tinkerbell12]

fine! no one post their opinions.. boo hoo.. jk i don't know if i want opinions

 

[TheGirlin14G]

I really like your poem!! It reminds me of my family And it makes me feel like writing a poem.. lol

 

[tinkerbell12]

thx...

 

[Babyjustrun]

I like it =)

 

[GirlWithSpunk]

I really like it.
I like the part about sticking together like peas in a pod.

 

[speedydisteen]

cool.