Disney Tales-Fiction

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Mickey glanced up at the huge, looming mountain. He had heard no one lives there but the Yetti. A beast with razor sharp claws and teeth which could puncture the strongest steel. Only the bravest of the brave dare ventured there. None returned. None knew the real truth about what had happened, but many tales were told, ranging from the Yetti to the ice breaking open as they fell to their doom.
The brave Mouse turned around as he heard shuffling from behind him. Donald Duck pulled himself over the ledge and sprawled himself on the ground, huffing and panting.
"How...much..further," He gasped with his sqeaky voice and fell back down.
"Quite a ways, but we can stay here for the night," Mickey replied, trying to sound hopeful.
"There's not really....Yetti's here...is there, Mickey?" Donald had asked after regaining his breath.
"I'm not sure, let's hope not," said the mouse as he turned around to see the duck almost faint behind him. "Don't worry, Donald, I'm sure the hard part of our journey is done. Just don't forget what we came for, Minnie is supposed to be up there. Let's hope nothing has happened to her."
"Yeah, Minnie...up there...mountains...journey..." Donald said drowzily as he dozed off to sleep.
Mickey lookey up to the peak of the mountain as a gust of wind tossed the snow around their feet, before he too, fell off to sleep.

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The next day was even harder than the last. The fog thickened with every minute and the ground grew slippery. The path seemed to grow thinner with every passing hour and the sun had been blocked out by the menacing clouds that layered the sky.
It hadn't been until noon that the travellers had spotted their destination. A dim light not to far above them glowed in one of the many caverns lining the mountain. The mouse and duck picked up their speed, desperate to get to their goal.

A few hours later they stood outside the large crevice. A little lamp shone dimly in the middle of the room.
Mickey noticed the cage right away. It dangled by a chain in one of the dark corner of the room.
"Minnie!" He shouted. That was a mistake.
A roar echoed throughout the hallway cave. Mickey kicked open the cage, breaking open the door.
"Mickey, we need to get out of here!" Minnie stuttered, throwing her arms around Mickey.
It was to late. A dark, looming shadow stood infront of them, blocking any chance of escaping from the icy cavern.

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