Your chance to be creative! Help me word my brother's wedding invitations!!

[6_Time_Momma]

Okay, my brother is getting married on Sept 2 and guess who he asked to design the invitations???

So, help me find just the right wording.

My brother is 39, married once for a short time years ago. No children. He is marrying a 45 yo widow with 2 adult daughters. They are marrying at an outside ceremony at their home. They will have dinner/reception following at their home.They want guests to be comfortable, so they want guests to dress casually. It will be an informal wedding with two bridemaids, two groomsmen, one ring bearer, and SIX flowergirls (hey, he has six neices....he couldn't make up his mind!! )

So let me have some ideas! Please!

 

[UnderTheMistletoe]

Firstly, because it is not in a church, the wording should read, "(Hosts) request the pleasure of your company," and not, "The honour of your presence," if you're going the traditional worrding route.

You've got a lot of options:

My family, your family
blending as one
Sharing, caring
a new life has begun
Jane Elizabeth Doe
and
John Daniel Greene
along with their children
invite you to join in the blending
of their families through marriage
on Thursday, the twenty-second of June
Two thousand and six
at two o'clock in the afternoon
at their home
123 Any Street
Anytown, USA

Jane Elizabeth Doe
and
John Daniel Greene
together with their children
Jessica, Molly, and Sarah
and
Michael and John
request the pleasure of your company
at their wedding celebration
on Thursday, the twenty-second of June
Two thousand and six
at two o'clock in the afternoon
at their home
123 Any Street
Anytown, USA


Jane Elizabeth Doe
and
John Daniel Greene
together with their children
request the pleasure of your company
at their wedding celebration
on Thursday, the twenty-second of June
Two thousand and six
at two o'clock in the afternoon
at their home
123 Any Street
Anytown, USA

Jessica, Molly, and Sarah
Michael and John
invite you to join them
as their parents
Jane Elizabeth Doe
and
John Daniel Greene
exchange marriage vows
on Thursday, the twenty-second of June
Two thousand and six
at two o'clock in the afternoon
at their home
123 Any Street
Anytown, USA


What a beautiful day it will be
when our mother
Jane Elizabeth Doe
exchanges marriage vows with
John Daniel Greene
Please share in our joy
as we become a family
on Thursday, the twenty-second of June
Two thousand and six
at two o'clock in the afternoon
at their home
123 Any Street
Anytown, USA
Jessica, Molly, and Sarah

What a beautiful day it will be when
Jane Elizabeth Doe
exchanges marriage vows with our father
John Daniel Greene
Please share in our joy
as we become a family
on Thursday, the twenty-second of June
Two thousand and six
at two o'clock in the afternoon
at their home
123 Any Street
Anytown, USA
Michael and John


The honour of your presence is requested
as we exchange marriage vows
and unite as one as a family
on Thursday, the twenty-second of June
Two thousand and six
at two o'clock in the afternoon
at their home
123 Any Street
Anytown, USA
Jane Elizabeth Doe
John Daniel Greene
Jessica, Molly, and Sarah
Michael and John

On Thursday, the twenty-second of June
Two thousand and six
our lives will unite as one
to become a family
Together with our children
we invite you to share in our joy
as we exchange marriage vows
at two o'clock in the afternoon
at their home
123 Any Street
Anytown, USA
Jane Elizabeth Doe
John Daniel Greene
​

I've assumed a date, names, and an "address"

 

[BuckNaked]

Jane, widow woman, two girls, both grown
John, divorced pretty quick, no kids of his own
Will marry at home, outside in fresh air
Dinner to follow, come casual, but not bare

 

[wils]

Jane, widow woman, two girls, both grown
John, divorced pretty quick, no kids of his own
Will marry at home, outside in fresh air
Dinner to follow, come casual, but not bare