The Best Random Thread Ever!!

[WDWtraveler27]

Nope. To be honest I don't even really know what Facebook is...

www.facebook.com


do you live in a cave LOL

 

[MusicalDisneyDreams]

www.facebook.com


do you live in a cave LOL

Might as well. I listen to practically no "popular" music, don't really pay attention to celebrity news, don't really get MySpace, Facebook, that kinda stuff, um... and I'm a total dork. (Proud of it too )

 

[WDWtraveler27]

So I'm writing a story right now. Not for school or anything, just for fun. I don't have all the dealis clear in my head yet (like the antagonisht.. just have very vague details about him) but I started writing it anyway. Here's the first coupla paragraphs:

I burst out of the door and into what should've been the darkness of night. I paused for a moment, stunned by the flashy lights of an unfarmilliar city. I'm sure my current location crossed across my thoughts, but I pushed my curiosity back. I reminded my self I needed to get away, and fast.
I knew I didn't have much time before he caught up to me. Surely, by now, he'd know I'd escaped. For the first few minutes of my mad dash through the foreign city streets, the only sound I heard was my own footsteps, breathing, and the splashing of rain on the pavement.
However, I soon heard a heavier set of feet behind me. I didn't need to look over my shoulder to know he was behind me and gaining.
Under my breath, I muttered, "This is what I get for being impulsive and not planning ahead." I pushed myself to run faster.

That's about half of what I've written so far. Anyone have opinions? Constructive criticisms? Yes, I know I probably speeled things wrong but that's why they didn't pick me for the spelling bee.

So happy! I hve tomorrow afternoon off from musical rehersal!

I like it!

 

[WDWtraveler27]

join facebook! there are a ton of DISers on there. thats why the teen board seems a bit dead at times. we all talk to eachother on facebook XD

 

[MusicalDisneyDreams]

I like it!

Really? Thank you I usually don't get positive comments... but I don't really want to go there.
I kinda know what I want to do with it, but I need a well-defined antagonist before I can really get into it.

And I'll get back to ya about the Facebook thing. Some of my friends have also suggested I make one, so I might. Dunno yet.

 

[WDWtraveler27]

well keep an open mind on the facebook thing!

wanna read my short story?

 

[MusicalDisneyDreams]

well keep an open mind on the facebook thing!

wanna read my short story?

Sure! I love reading other people's work.

 

[WDWtraveler27]

Sure! I love reading other people's work.

It was a cold night. For some reason I could not fall asleep. The night was still and quiet. No sounds from the outside. No cars in the street. No rustling of the trees. Suddenly I felt the wind blow throughout the room. My head was facing the door, with my back to the window. But for some reason i knew there was someone at the window. I grasped the blanket tightly. I took a deep breath. I waited about 5 minutes until I finally spoke to the mysterious figure at the window. "I began to think you would not come" I said. The figure remained quiet. "I've been waiting. I'm 17 now. I thought you had forgotten about me, Peter" i said to him. I turned towards the window to see Peter extending his arm. I just laid starring at him. "What's wrong Wendy? Don't you trust me?" he said. I grabed his hand and I heard Tink approach my room. She fluttered above me and filled my room with pixie dust. Peter and I began flying above London as we once did. "Time to go back one more time wendy" We flew towards the second star to the right where adventure and fun was waiting for us.

 

[MusicalDisneyDreams]

It was a cold night. For some reason I could not fall asleep. The night was still and quiet. No sounds from the outside. No cars in the street. No rustling of the trees. Suddenly I felt the wind blow throughout the room. My head was facing the door, with my back to the window. But for some reason i knew there was someone at the window. I grasped the blanket tightly. I took a deep breath. I waited about 5 minutes until I finally spoke to the mysterious figure at the window. "I began to think you would not come" I said. The figure remained quiet. "I've been waiting. I'm 17 now. I thought you had forgotten about me, Peter" i said to him. I turned towards the window to see Peter extending his arm. I just laid starring at him. "What's wrong Wendy? Don't you trust me?" he said. I grabed his hand and I heard Tink approach my room. She fluttered above me and filled my room with pixie dust. Peter and I began flying above London as we once did. "Time to go back one more time wendy" We flew towards the second star to the right where adventure and fun was waiting for us.

That's amazing! I can't really write short stories, shortest one (wrtten in a notebook) is 6 pages

 

[WDWtraveler27]

I chose to write short stories because i just cant commit to starting those long stories that I want to make.

 

[MusicalDisneyDreams]

I chose to write short stories because i just cant commit to starting those long stories that I want to make.

I lied. Forgot a story about a leaf that was 2 pages typed.

I start off intending to write a short story, but I like details too much.

I kinda want a new location...

 

[WDWtraveler27]

im thinking about writing more about Peter Pan.

I love those characters!

 

[MusicalDisneyDreams]

im thinking about writing more about Peter Pan.

I love those characters!

I really like the Peter and the Starcatchers books.

My feet are cold.
I should put socks on.

My English speech is on Wednesday!

 

[WDWtraveler27]

I was about to read that book an hour ago but I decided to watch Pinocchio instead XD

 

[MusicalDisneyDreams]

I was about to read that book an hour ago but I decided to watch Pinocchio instead XD

It's been a while since I've watched that one.
Same with Dumbo, Fox and the Hound, Aristocats, and many more.
It's because half of our video cassettes (sp?) are broken.
We're working on getting our Disney library all into DVDs. Like we've been buying the DVDs starting with the broken VHS tapes. Did that make any sense?

 

[MusicalDisneyDreams]

I'm tired. Goodnight everyone.

 

[WDWtraveler27]

yes it did! beauty and the beast is going to be out on DVD in march!!!! im soooo excited!

 

[WDWtraveler27]

I'm tired. Goodnight everyone.

goodnight!

 

[marypops!]

I'm annoyed at my school's computers. I spent the lesson doing work on Word, and at the end of the lesson, the thing crashed and I didn't save my work -_-

 

[Cassidy]

im tired