Tell Me If You Like This :)

[Tinkerbell63]

I tried making a song nd i wanted to know if you liked it


Every night i close my eyes and i cant sleep cuz im thinking of you
every night i look up at the stars and wonder''do dreams come true?"


I know that you love her
But i love you more than ever
i cant help but thinking "will we ever be together?"

Cuz you and me together like this:
people saythat we're so precious
But i cant believe its true
cuz both of us together:we're a dream come true

And you say thatyou like her
But you say that you love me

I dont know which one to listen to
cuz your friends say shes the one you choose




Im not really done yet

 

[zachattack667]

what would be the tempo?

 

[mickey'sbff]

I like it! I kinda wrote a song, but I failed epically.

 

[Tinkerbell63]

Well IDK about the tempo yet and thanks

 

[cousinbb]

i was reading it like a poem. Its nice good job

 

[yamindie]

really cute i like it

 

[Monorail Fan:)]

Great job!