That is a great first page. I wish I had the talent to create my own. The journal I am making for my son is a jumble of lots of designs, so it doesn't really 'flow', but at least he will be able to look back over the memories!
I did make a word document page with space for the flight number, flight times and a space to draw a pic of the plane, as well as writing some facts about the plane (DS Loves fact finding, do thought that would keep him occupied!)