Keyblade Masters In Waiting (KH Discussion thread) - ALL KH Fans Welcome!

[Captain Brain]

Here's part of my fanfic, Becka. Yes, I wrote it down just for you.

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Riku awoke to discover that if felt as if the ground beneath him was shifting gently. Riku then remembered that he was no longer in Hollow Bastion. Riku realized that he was on Captain Hook's vessel.

Riku still couldn't believe that Maleficent had let him search for Kairi. What Riku didn't know, was that Maleficent believed that Kairi would help her plan. Riku sighed and got out of bed. He wandered throught the ship. When he arrived on deck, he was startled at who he saw. It was Peter Pan. Riku quickly sprang into action and locked Peter down below deck hoping that he would stay there for a while.

Riku climbed up to the crows nest and looked out. The ship swerved and a small vessel fell aboard. "Oh great," thought Riku. It was Sora, Riku's childhood friend.

"What are you doing here, Sora?" Riku asked loudly.

"Riku!" Sora exclaimed.

"Go home, Sora, Kairi is safe no thanks to you."

"You have Kairi with you?"

"Yes, you twit. Had you have come with me when we met in Traverse Town, we would all be together again."

"Riku, what's happened to you?"

"What's happened to you, Sora! All you want to do now is play with that Keyblade. I bet that you don't care about me or Kairi anymore."

"Riku...I've been lookeing for you and Kairi..."

"Ha! Yeah right! Why didn't you want to help me find Kairi?" Riku challened. "Sora, I have unbelievable power now. Here is a sample. Enjoy the Heartless."

"Riku...Why?"

Riku then took this chance and ran below deck. He told Kairi, "I will find your heart, I swear my life on it." Riku then layed Kairi down and left. He headed back up to the deck to see Captain Hook in a state of panic.

"That boy discovered Pan!" Hook exclaimed.

"It will be all right, you can finish them off with these Heartless."

~*~

"Sora, what's with yer friend?" asked Goofy.

"I...I don't know...I've never seen him like this." Sora, Donald, and Goofy then met Peter Pan. Peter told them how to get around the ship. Peter also told them about Captain Hook.

"Sora, I know how you feel. I'm looking for someone, too. Her name is Wendy. Maybe we will be able to find them both together."

Sora, Donald, and Goofy joined Peter Pan to find their missing friends. They searched throughout the ship until they found a locked door. Sora unlocked it with his Keyblade and went inside. Inside was Wendy.

"Wendy! You're safe!"

"Oh, Peter! I'm so glad to see you!"

"Wendy, I'm Sora. Did you see another girl?"

"As a matter of fact, I did. She was taken out of here about a half hour ago by a boy about your age."

"Riku again..." Sora said with an eyeroll.

"Sora, I have to take care of Wendy. Go on without me, I'll rejoin you later."

~*~

Meanwhile, Captain Hook was furious. "How dare he! That Pan! Smee! Get in here!"

Smee walked in, "Yes, Cap'n?"

"Find the keybearer and make him walk the plank!"

~*~

Riku tried not to let himself feel desperation. He couldn't help himself, though. Kairi's heart was missing, and he couldn't do a thing about it. Or could he?

Riku opened a portal leading to Hollow Bastion. Here he hoped to convince Maleficent to help him find her heart. Hope was all Riku had left.

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So? What did you think? Be honest!

 

[PurpleDucky]

Here's part of my fanfic, Becka. Yes, I wrote it down just for you.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Riku awoke to discover that if felt as if the ground beneath him was shifting gently. Riku then remembered that he was no longer in Hollow Bastion. Riku realized that he was on Captain Hook's vessel.

Riku still couldn't believe that Maleficent had let him search for Kairi. What Riku didn't know, was that Maleficent believed that Kairi would help her plan. Riku sighed and got out of bed. He wandered throught the ship. When he arrived on deck, he was startled at who he saw. It was Peter Pan. Riku quickly sprang into action and locked Peter down below deck hoping that he would stay there for a while.

Riku climbed up to the crows nest and looked out. The ship swerved and a small vessel fell aboard. "Oh great," thought Riku. It was Sora, Riku's childhood friend.

"What are you doing here, Sora?" Riku asked loudly.

"Riku!" Sora exclaimed.

"Go home, Sora, Kairi is safe no thanks to you."

"You have Kairi with you?"

"Yes, you twit. Had you have come with me when we met in Traverse Town, we would all be together again."

"Riku, what's happened to you?"

"What's happened to you, Sora! All you want to do now is play with that Keyblade. I bet that you don't care about me or Kairi anymore."

"Riku...I've been lookeing for you and Kairi..."

"Ha! Yeah right! Why didn't you want to help me find Kairi?" Riku challened. "Sora, I have unbelievable power now. Here is a sample. Enjoy the Heartless."

"Riku...Why?"

Riku then took this chance and ran below deck. He told Kairi, "I will find your heart, I swear my life on it." Riku then layed Kairi down and left. He headed back up to the deck to see Captain Hook in a state of panic.

"That boy discovered Pan!" Hook exclaimed.

"It will be all right, you can finish them off with these Heartless."

~*~

"Sora, what's with yer friend?" asked Goofy.

"I...I don't know...I've never seen him like this." Sora, Donald, and Goofy then met Peter Pan. Peter told them how to get around the ship. Peter also told them about Captain Hook.

"Sora, I know how you feel. I'm looking for someone, too. Her name is Wendy. Maybe we will be able to find them both together."

Sora, Donald, and Goofy joined Peter Pan to find their missing friends. They searched throughout the ship until they found a locked door. Sora unlocked it with his Keyblade and went inside. Inside was Wendy.

"Wendy! You're safe!"

"Oh, Peter! I'm so glad to see you!"

"Wendy, I'm Sora. Did you see another girl?"

"As a matter of fact, I did. She was taken out of here about a half hour ago by a boy about your age."

"Riku again..." Sora said with an eyeroll.

"Sora, I have to take care of Wendy. Go on without me, I'll rejoin you later."

~*~

Meanwhile, Captain Hook was furious. "How dare he! That Pan! Smee! Get in here!"

Smee walked in, "Yes, Cap'n?"

"Find the keybearer and make him walk the plank!"

~*~

Riku tried not to let himself feel desperation. He couldn't help himself, though. Kairi's heart was missing, and he couldn't do a thing about it. Or could he?

Riku opened a portal leading to Hollow Bastion. Here he hoped to convince Maleficent to help him find her heart. Hope was all Riku had left.

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So? What did you think? Be honest!

Did you write it, or was it from the game?
If you wrote it

 

[PurpleDucky]

Stupid Devan! When I was battling Riku, I stocked all my cards, leaving me one, having to load every card!

I won't be doing that again.

 

[Captain Brain]

Did you write it, or was it from the game?
If you wrote it

I wrote it.

 

[big_ol_lineman]

wow!! that takes some major skittles

 

[DollfieDreams]

aww angelfacesugarbearsparklebutta.k.abilly! that was so adorable! see?! keep writing things down and you could go absolutely nuts with a story. and since you posted yours, i'll post back with one of mine. be wary: i HATE it. i HATE the soraxkairi pairing, but hey. :]
it was also a challenge fic where i had to use "i'd even stand on my tip toes for him!" as my theme.
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It was strange how on those hot, sticky, almost claustrophobic days, the world seemed to just slow down to an unnerving crawl. It felt like it was even hard to breathe beyond the quiet confines of peoples homes.

Riku sighed, a hand holding up his chin as he stared out the small, square window that was in his bathroom. He had moved an extra dining table chair in there because the view of the ocean from that one little square was just breath taking. Sometimes sitting there for hours on end, Riku would sketch, or try his hand at photography, all with the hopes of wanting to capture that one perfect moment between the world, himself, and pure happiness. A sort of harmonious acceptance of one another after a long time of not being able to face himself in the mirror.

He had just begun to sink into his "comfy" position where one leg was tucked under his butt, his side against the wall, and his arms holding up his head on the small sill: when of course, the phone rang. He barely even blinked as the robotic "brring" kept sounding throughout the small house. Eventually, for lack of nothing going on (it seemed even the ocean was void of an emotion today) did he drag himself up and into the living room to answer the desperate phone.

"Hello?"

"Riku! Hey! It's about time you picked up the phone! Whatcha' up to?"

"Oh, nothing. Why?"

"Well..., I was..sort of wondering...would you mind meeting me down at the beach in a few minutes? I wanted to talk to you about something."

After a pause, and a glance around the room with a sigh, Riku nodded to himself, rather than the person on the other line.

"Sure."

- - -

Riku stepped out his back door which led directly onto the sandy-white beach. He inwardly groaned as his bare feet instantly sunk and fit themselves perfectly with the grains of sand. You'd think after living all one's life on an island, one should've gotten used to the sand by now. But no, Riku was, forever and always, the rebel, and he would never get used to or love the sand.

He trudged a little down the beach, the sand shifting together and making shrill "squeaking" noises, before he spotted a puff of red hair that seemed to materialize in front of him.

'Geez. I didn't even see her there. Great...I keep zoning out..again.'

The girl turned when she heard his approach and smiled, that heart-stopping, breath-taking, pretty princess smile she was known for. "Hey, 'Ku."

"Hey."

She smiled, her sandaled feet instantly starting to kick at a stray shell as she looked around a little awkwardly. Tilting his head to the side in confusion, Riku only watched her. 'I wonder why she's acting so...off with me.'

"You wanted to talk to me about something?" Riku asked, tucking a piece of stray silver hair behind his ear. And just like that, her eyes sprung back up to meet his, and that smile was on her face again.

"You're right. I do. Lets walk, kay?" she said, more than suggested, and the two started walking down the beach slowly.

Nothing was said between the two for sometime, each were content in their own little worlds. Watching the inhale and exhale of the surf and listening to the random calls of the sea birds waltzing overhead.

"Riku...how do you know if you like someone?" she asked, startling said boy out of his thoughts as he finally turned to look at her. Tan arms were folded neatly against her chest, a single jade bracelet hanging loosely from her thin wrist.

The question was a little odd for him because he wasn't expecting such a question. "Well....," he started, licking his dry lips, and began to find his feet a little more interesting than they should've been. "You sort of get this feeling. Like your entire world just lights up when they're around. And your heart practically swells and sings when they smile. You crave their attention, their time, their affection. You get choked up and lonely when they're not around. You feel spiteful and jealous when they're with someone else...," he trailed off, his eyes seeking the horizon that his mind just...couldn't grip. Why did saying all this, suddenly make his throat swell and his heart hurt?

He didn't notice her constant nodding, the way she'd smile, or frown when he'd say things. But she suddenly stopped, turned, and grasped onto his hand. "Oh, Riku..."

Riku blinked out of his reverie and turned to her, barely noticing their hands were now connected. He opened his mouth to speak, and ask why her blue eyes were suddenly swimming with tears but she spoke first.

"I know exactly what you mean. I can't keep him out of my mind. I've tried to, honest! Oh, but every time I see him! I suddenly feel complete," she grasped tighter to his hand, while her other hand, the one with the bracelet, grasped the part of her shirt that lay over her heart.

Riku's heart was pounding. It was so loud in his ears that it almost stung, and his mouth was suddenly dry. This cannot be happening...

"Who?" he nearly squeaked out, his brow creased in worry and his stomach jittery and full of butterflies.

She smiled then. Her crystal-like tears catching a glimmer of the sun that was slowly moving towards the water into its final plunge to sunset, before they dribbled down her slightly pink tinged cheeks. She opened her mouth, and only uttered one name. "Sora."

Riku's eyes widened, but only a little. His jaw tightened, then relaxed. His fingers suddenly felt clammy, but were warmed up again by her touch. She loved him? She loved him too?

"I just...I don't know how to tell him. I don't know how to tell him that I'd do anything for him! That I'd..I'd even...I'd even stand on my tip-toes for him!" she blurted out, pulling herself to his chest. She started crying more, her slender shoulders shaking with all the pure emotion she was finally letting out.

He only stared. Stared at the houses that stood silent watching, waiting. Stared at the slowly waving palm trees scattered about the beach. Stared at the blurring sky above his head and the lace-like clouds floating there. But he caught himself. And he brought his arms up and around her form, and held her. The best way he knew how.

"Oh, Kairi. Just tell him. Tell him what you told me," it was short, it was simple, but he just couldn't think of something else to say. She had nodded, smiled at him, thanked him and told him that she understood. And she had left him, with a parting kiss to his cheek and a delicate wave.

From that little square window he can see them; holding hands as they walk down the beach, giggling and laughing in the surf, chasing sea gulls before they could even touch down. Sure, it makes his heart long for a love like that. And sometimes it even makes him feel just a tad bit lonely.

But he had finally found it. That harmonious balance. And a picture of pure happiness to go with it. The love his two best friends now shared, emanated enough happiness for him, too. And he could think of no better happiness in the world.
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bleh...>_>

 

[StitchfansJr]

Those are good stories!

 

[Captain Brain]

Thanks for all the comments.

Becka, I like yours. I'm going to keep adding on to it and submit it to fanfiction.net.

 

[PurpleDucky]

I lost to riku..for the second time
He's good!
If I stock all my cards, then I won't have anymore

 

[Captain Brain]

I lost to riku..for the second time
He's good!
If I stock all my cards, then I won't have anymore

That is probably the hardest battle in the game, I beat him on my first try.

Note: Dark Aura is Sora killing machine. Break it. Or else. Don't bother with Donald and Goofy, they're basically useless in this battle. The only magic you need is Cure and maybe a couple Cloud. If you can, put in the Maleficent Dragon enemy card, or Oogie Boogie. Oogie restores health, Mal Dragon makes you a killing machine.

 

[PurpleDucky]

That is probably the hardest battle in the game, I beat him on my first try.

Note: Dark Aura is Sora killing machine. Break it. Or else. Don't bother with Donald and Goofy, they're basically useless in this battle. The only magic you need is Cure and maybe a couple Cloud. If you can, put in the Maleficent Dragon enemy card, or Oogie Boogie. Oogie restores health, Mal Dragon makes you a killing machine.

I'll go to level 52 so I can put Mal in
Dark Aura is where everything turns dark and he comes out randomly stabbing you right?

 

[Captain Brain]

I'll go to level 52 so I can put Mal in
Dark Aura is where everything turns dark and he comes out randomly stabbing you right?

Yes.

 

[PurpleDucky]

Yes.

He only got me a couple times with that, but I was just running around trying to avoid it

 

[DollfieDreams]

Thanks for all the comments.

Becka, I like yours. I'm going to keep adding on to it and submit it to fanfiction.net.

yes! yay! and you'll link me when its finished/updated..right..right?

 

[Captain Brain]

yes! yay! and you'll link me when its finished/updated..right..right?

of course.

 

[Captain Brain]

GAH!

I'm stuck on Cloud and Leon in the Hades cup. -.-

I am at level 56, and I can't beat them? Becka? Any advice?

 

[DollfieDreams]

fight them one at a time. its a little hard to do it this way, but ya can. try taking down leon first. he's easily taken down by aerial attacks, which he doesnt fend off very well.

 

[Captain Brain]

fight them one at a time. its a little hard to do it this way, but ya can. try taking down leon first. he's easily taken down by aerial attacks, which he doesnt fend off very well.

Ok go after Leon.....

I beat Chernaborg today, I think that the music in The End of The World is very annoying. It's like the music that starts during the beginning.

 

[DollfieDreams]

Ok go after Leon.....

I beat Chernaborg today, I think that the music in The End of The World is very annoying. It's like the music that starts during the beginning.

xD i thought it was pretty...-loser-

 

[Captain Brain]

xD i thought it was pretty...-loser-

It was nice at first, but after a while it got on my nerves. I am still wondering: When should I go bash Ansem's face in?