I need help making a disign (of my creation) better please :)

[Cindy Girl]

HI! We are taking the Magic to Castaway Cay Jan 31, 2014-Feb 3, 2014 During this time the Super BOwl will be on funnel vision. This is my first attempt at a Disign...but it isn't great very plain. I know there are many wonderful Disigners out there. If you wouldn't mind, could you please make this better

Thanks!!

 

[Dom13]

If you can get me the raw, unaltered picture I'll take a stab at it.

 

[Cindy Girl]

Thanks Dom I PM'd the links to you

 

[Dom13]

How's this?

 

[Cindy Girl]

Thank you Thank you!!! This is AWESOME!!!!