Okay - here goes a 2nd poem (Just typed it all and have to re-do it cause it went nowhere!) I am toiling with sending some on to a friend who is a publisher but that is a way scary step.
Please give me honest, constuctive criticism.
I wrote this with inspiration from my Grandparents who lived next door to each other from age 4 & 5. They never were apart and she always said he was her Knight in Shining armor...her prince. He saved her when she was trapped in a dysfunctional home and I will forever love their romance and hold it up to my life as a picture of what I would want for my own. If only we could all be so lucky.
Carry Me
Carry me to the time when I will wear your ring
Where fireflies dance and the crickets sing
Carry me far from the home in which I reside
Where shadows haunt and tempers hide
Carry me in your strong arms of love
Where safety surrounds and passion cries from above
Carry me to a glorious, wonderous place
Mystical, magical yet so full of grace
Carry me to a far reached, distant shore
Where "I love you" won't fall from my lips upon the barren floor
Carry me with you from dream to sweet dream
Carry me with you to sights yet to behold and unseen
Carry me through the night and throughout the next day
Carry me quite simply
Because I need to be
Carried away.
Very Good!!!
AMY....Glad you rounded up the whole herd! Scary when one goes missing!![]()
FIDGE....You are so right about mean posters! Why do people have to act that way???? You're so great on the soap box!![]()
Heather....Jay (jaycns) had this done during her trip. Refer to her trip report--which is now in completed reports--and pm her if you need to. My dinner at Coral Reef (medium rare ahi tuna) was fabulous but no one else in our family liked what they had. We were seated on the back wall right by the kitchen door and service was pretty spotty. In restaurants the managers usually put the newbie servers near the kitchen which might explain that. Make sure you're in the front row right by where they put your sign up and you'll be fine.
Shannon! A lot of us were single when we were your age! You are NOT a loser....we're just older....OK, we're not all older....I'M OLD! There!![]()
STILL WAITING TO HEAR DR. RESULTS FROM STACEY, DAWN, & FIDGE!
SANDY!!! I want to know where the bad banned DISers go! PM me!
Thanks, I will fgo look at that tomorrow.
I have a question....I would love to attend the Peeps meet but if I can't....can we still order shirts? I think it would be fun to support the walkers by having mini walks. I could walk at the MOA the same distance you guys who go walk. It would be a symbol of support - kind of like the breast cancer walks they do on the same day.
Great idea

A birthday the day after in WDW will be perfect!!! How exciting!
This sounds promising! Is his pic on your myspace in your friends pic? I am going to have to have a looksee! Be sure to keep us updated! Romance is just what you need right now!
Another winner! You are very gifted~!
Great news Fidge! What about Dawn, any results yet?
I just got home. I got good news and bad news. Let's start with good. My MRI was fine, no surgery for me! Bad new - I have what is called SI Joint dysfunction. The doctor said it would be a lifetime thing. I will go to Physical Therapy 3 times a week to start with and she will teach me exercises to do daily at home. He said my life would have to change. No heavy lifting or doing activities that require a lot of twisting. Right now he does not want me to lift anything heavier that a gallon of milk.My laundry is heavier than that! Then he told scary stories about his patients that have this and how when they didn't keep up with the exercises and did not listen to him, they ended up on disability and in lots of pain. Anyway, I am still processing this. I will learn more when I see the physical therapist - she specializes in this type of pain.
Then to top it off, we go to pick up my DS at school and his teacher tells me that his President project is due today! I remember seeing this assignment like last Monday, before my life went a little crazy. For some reason I thought it was due next week. And DH has been doing the homework. I work with her so she knows I have been out of commission. She told me she has only taken off 10 points so far! So now I have to go do this ridiculous project. My DS is in 2nd grade, they are suppose to read books or encyclopedia's about a president (you know those encyclopedia's that are on a 2nd grade reading level) then write a report with topic sentences and supporting details
then make a poster and prepare and oral presentation! Are you kidding me? She told me he could type it or write it!!! So guess who will be doing this project! Along with an assignment I have due in my class! They moved the smilies again! Insert flame angry guy! Vent over!
Hope it all goes better. Look up things on the interent and then let him put in his words as you type. Remember 2nd grade does not have to be long. Just get the main information. Be sure to go to PT and do what they say. Good luck.