Creativity Corner

PiratePrincess1392

Philippians 4:13 "I can do all things through
Joined
Dec 11, 2006
Messages
126
Hey this is where I have posted a really good story. So far it is turning out pretty cool. Feel free to add whatever you want as long as it is not too long and is approproate. I really want to see how good this can get with all our creative Disney minds.
 
Ok here is one, I will put one up for a while and then do a new one later on.

In a world where everyone has some kind of special ability, it is not normal to not have powers. Those without powers are called, normals.

In the outskirts of town, sat a small house. The house had been turned into a hospital for "normals" since normals didn't get many rights in society. A loud baby cry rang out through the night. A mother hugged close her new baby and the doctor walked in. He took the baby's blood and put it into a machine nearby. The father and mother watched as the machine beeped and spit out a small sheet of paper. The doctor put on his reading glasses, and examined the data. He sighed and said, " He is a perfectly healthy baby..." "But he is a normal." The father said after using his mind reading powers. The mom started to cry and between sobs choked out, "I thought...with you being having powers...and i thought my normal gene would be weak." "I'm sorry." was all the doctor could say and left the new parents to think about the curse they might have brought upon their child...
 
Umm...we already have a potc our own story thread... i'll go easy on you because your new. ;)
 
What do you mean? I understand that you have a POTC one but im just doing one about anything. I didn't mean to copy. Sorry if i did. :confused3
 

Is anyone else not okay with this because if people are not then i will stop and try something else i guess. (Although i was pretty excited about this...)
 
Anyway... since no one seems to not like this idea, lets start writing. I guess I will add a little more to maybe make it a little easier.

8 years later...​

Daniel's mom and dad had always treated him like he was the single most inportant thing in their life (except for the farm of course.) Daniel had never met any other kids though he did see them play down at the town square when his family went to sell their food. His parents never did let him play with them except maybe occasionally, but not for very long. He was fine with watching them though because he just liked to watch them use their powers. Everyday he saw some new ability and started to wonder when he would get his. Little did he know that his parents didn't want him playing very much with other children because he was a normal. He didn't know this of course until one day when he ran into a small blue boy outside his house...
 
ppl please write!! I want to hear your creativity, hence the name 'creativity corner ' LOL
 
I shall write I don't even really like potc...

The blue boy new everything about everything there was to know. Daniel (isthathisname) started watching the blue boy,Evan, and eventually they started hanging out together. One day Daniel and Evan were sitting on the edge of a cliff talking about there life stories. And finally Daniel asked Evan the question that had been on his mind " When will I get my powers?" I know you can answer this, I know you know everything. In a snotty and distasteful tone Evan stated ...
 
It isn't about POTC but thank you sooo much for replying. I will now

Evan just stared at Daniel and said " you never will. Have you never been told? You are a normal." "A what?" Daniel asked in astonishment.
 
So, basically, it's kinda like role playing?
And can I add a new character?

Evan layed back on the ground. "Wha-what do you mean?" Daniel asked again. Evan's eyes flickered from the sky, to Daniel, and back towards the sky.

(sorry, that's the best I could think of.)
 
"Im sure you have heard of normals before" Evan said. Daniel looked at him puzzled. "Actually...No. I have never heard of those things you call normals. Could you explain??" Evan drew in his breath and started explaining what a normal was.
 
"A normal is someone who doesn't have any powers, someone who isn't gifted...like you," Evan sat up as he said this. His dark blue eyes pierced Daniel's light green. "So...I won't ever get my powers...I'm just...normal?" Daniel asked, looking away from the cold eyes the looked back at him. "Yup. Never gonna do anything special." Evan layed back down and stared at the sky.
 
As Daniel tried to hold back tears he heard his parents calling for him. He said goodbye to Evan and hurried along. On the way to his house, Daniel had been crying. He was very puzzled and it was too much for him to take in at once. He was overwhelmed. When his smiling pairents saw him their smile quickly faded.
 
I know I was just stating that I didn't like potc therefore me not participating in there story thread...

Daniel's Mom cried out " Oh my goodness Daniel my baby what's wrong?""Oh ummm... nothing"Daniel stated as he ran to his room. He had decided not tell his parents, maybe Evan was lieing. "I will find out" he thought as he layed back on his bed and started planning...
 
Daniel stared into the mirror. His color changing eyes were blue because of his sadness. "I'm not like everyone else?" He thought back. Maybe that's why his parents had seemed overprotective. Were they trying to protect him or just keep him clueless? He turned away from the mirror just as his parents walked in to say goodnight. "You okay sport?" his dad said. Daniel hid his thoughts and thought about something else because he knew that his dad would be reading his mind. "He's seems to be running a fever." his mom commented as she placed her hand on Daniels forehead. He pushed her away. "I'm fine. Just tired." "Okay well goodnight." his parents said as they left the room...
 
And yes you can add another character but private message me about wat the character is about.
 
Daniel fell into a light sleep. He didn't realize that his parents walked into his small room and embraced each other. They both glanced lovingly at Daniel. "How could such a sweet boy not be considered like everyone else. Why can't he just fit in." his mother said sadly. Her eyes also turning blue.(as was accustomed to all people in this world, even normals.) "He's dreaming about, a blue boy." His father mumbled confused. " Why that's strange." his mother thought. But Daniel was dreaming about a blue boy, Evan.

"So, where exactly did you come from?" Daniel turned to Evan as he asked this. "Well, no where in particular. My parents...I've never really known them...They abandoned me when I was young...because of this." Evan pulled on his sky blue skin. " They were glad at least that I wasn't a normal..." "A what?" Daniel asked, but Evan continued. "...but it just wasn't something they wanted to deal with...because I'm considered cursed." Evan paused and threw a rock over the cliff. Daniel stared as if to encourage Evan to continue. " Because I'm blue, I'm considered cursed because long ago...

Someone pick up there.
 
in a far away land a painter spilt blue paint on him and the paint dyed him because he always lied.
...
 
Sports Blondie said:
in a far away land a painter spilt blue paint on him and the paint dyed him because he always lied.
...

ok? no offense but could you try something a little more science-fictiony?
 

New Posts


Disney Vacation Planning. Free. Done for You.
Our Authorized Disney Vacation Planners are here to provide personalized, expert advice, answer every question, and uncover the best discounts. Let Dreams Unlimited Travel take care of all the details, so you can sit back, relax, and enjoy a stress-free vacation.
Start Your Disney Vacation
Disney EarMarked Producer






DIS Facebook DIS youtube DIS Instagram DIS Pinterest DIS Tiktok DIS Twitter

Add as a preferred source on Google

Back
Top Bottom