Advice on Updated DISign

[chaoscent]

The reason I don't make many disigns is because I get caught up in the details. I spend hours making a design, and agonize over every decision. I have finished this design and would like some feedback. it is for the pin event on 5/3. Looking at it again, I realize the sentences aren't spaced equally and I am not sure I like the WDW Logo gif that I have, but couldn't find another .gif with all 4 parks? I found a few but when I downloaded them, they said gif, but weren't see through. So anyway, here it is and feedback is appreciated. thanks, Penny
See changes below

Thanks, Penny

 

[M_I_C_K_E_Y]

Penny,
I like it, I think you did a very good job.

The only real feedback I might give is to make the text a little smaller or the pictures a little smaller (or both) so that it doesn't all look so 'close' together. Having a little space will make it easier to read and more pleasing to the eye.

I love the logos at the bottom. Dom13 did a great job!

 

[chaoscent]

Thanks Mickey, I made the writing smaller. I also deleted the background. Would appreciate feedback as to what one looks better

Thanks, Penny

 

[M_I_C_K_E_Y]

I do think that the second one looks a little less busy but maybe adding a little color in the background, like a gradient of some kind, might look nice.

Also, maybe move the last line and logos down just a little.

Other than that, now that the text is smaller - I think it looks good. I would wear it.

 

[chaoscent]

Thanks Amy - I don't know how to do a gradient, so I am going to try and learn.
Penny

 

[rumblytumbly]

Penny,

I think the design is great. I do like the second one better because I think it's easier to read. I think the design is well....PRICELESS!

 

[chaoscent]

How about these two?

Thanks for the feedback.

 

[rumblytumbly]

Hey,

You figured out the gradient!

They both look great. I couldn't choose.

 

[DisneyMom92]

I like the second one, but both look great! Good job.

 

[chaoscent]

Thank you both & now I know how to do gradient and I can make it lighter. that's what took me so long to figure out. Ahh, the ins/outs of figuring stuff out. It would be sooooo much cheaper to go buy shirts. thanks again, Penny

 

[M_I_C_K_E_Y]

Penny,
I like them both but I prefer the second one as well! Good job!

 

[~*~Michelle~*~]

I like the second one as well

 

[rumblytumbly]

Ahh, the ins/outs of figuring stuff out. It would be sooooo much cheaper to go buy shirts. thanks again, Penny

Ain't that the truth!