Writers Thread

[LionKingDramaQueen]

Okay so I figured I wouldn't keep y'all waiting. So I'm gonna try to say all I can on this phone. As you know, chacha won so she has dibs on the next challenge host. However, Caitlyn DID PM me and I loved her idea, so if Chacha declines, Caitlyn wil host. Also...I am aware that I missed multiple people on my icons...AND I'm gonna try and redo all of their sizing because they appear to be a little big. I have more to tell yAll but I'll wait until tonight. Chacha... Please lemme know by PM what you wanna do. Thanks!!!

 

[PlutosRHM55]

This sounds interesting... I'll join in~

 

[DisneyDreamer908]

Ok sry guys just went on the thread today and it took me an hour to write this but i luv writing and thot this was fun so i dnt even care if the winner was picked already i just wanna get some feedback. so anyway heres my story about Gaston from BEAUTY AND THE BEAST! hope u like!

It was an ordinary day in the village. Gaston was on his way to the library, as usual. For a thirteen-year-old boy, he was quite the reader. Reading was the only thing that truly made him happy. With his dad being away all the time, he often felt lonely. When Gaston was two, his mother was kidnapped in the forest. Although he had a nanny, he wanted so badly to have a real mother. Ten minutes after being in the library, Gaston walked out, carrying four books in his hands. As he was walking out, his eyes fell upon a familiar face. There she was, sitting on the fountain, looking more beautiful than ever.

Gaston had a crush on Evette for a couple years now. He just never had the guts to tell her because she was popular in his school; meanwhile, Gaston wasn't. He kept to himself and was occassionally made fun of for being somewhat of a geek. It also didn't help that he was the scrawniest boy in the seventh grade. However, something struck Gaston's mind. Evette was sitting alone. If he was ever going to make a move, now was his chance. He never spoke to Evette before, but from what he knew, she had never partaken in making fun of him. So, he took a deep breath and and sat down beside her. "H-hello...Ev-v-vette..", he managed to say.

She simply smiled, but looked somewhat distracted. "Um...w-well...I was, uh wondering...would you like to be my g-g...", he could feel his heart pounding out of his chest. "I really like you!', he blurted out. Evette's face was red, however, she wasn't looking at Gaston. Gaston turned around to see what she was looking at. Behind him stood Gerard. Gerard was one of the boys in his class who made fun of him. "What did you just say to my girlfriend?", he spat. Judging by the piece of bread in each of Gerad's hands, Gaston guessed that they were on a date. His face was sweating like crazy.

"Evette would never go for you! Your just a puny little loser who reads all day! Girls don't like that! So, get lost!" Gerard paused, then said, " Oh, but don't get too lost. You don't want to end up like your stupid mother." Gaston was so upset he didn't what to say. All he could do was run away before they saw the tears streaming down his face. And that was the last time he ever read a book. After years of training, he became the Gaston as we know him today. And that is the story of how the victim became a bully. The End.

sry it was long i tried to shorten it! btw i rly wanna pursue writing as a career either to be a journalist or novelist. im also in the school newspaper at my skool. well anyway, im excited for the next challenge so see u soon!

 

[StarTunnel]

Okay so I figured I wouldn't keep y'all waiting. So I'm gonna try to say all I can on this phone. As you know, chacha won so she has dibs on the next challenge host. However, Caitlyn DID PM me and I loved her idea, so if Chacha declines, Caitlyn wil host. Also...I am aware that I missed multiple people on my icons...AND I'm gonna try and redo all of their sizing because they appear to be a little big. I have more to tell yAll but I'll wait until tonight. Chacha... Please lemme know by PM what you wanna do. Thanks!!!

I will politely decline the hosting gig~ I am not very good at coming up with themes, I need someone else's prompts to get writing, so I will pass the torch onto Caitlyn!

And I want to thank everyone who complimented my story, I read everyone else's and they were all brilliant *By the way I said brilliant like Ron Weasley*
I felt the need to add that in there.

 

[LionKingDramaQueen]

Okay, everybody! As you can see...Chacha has "politely declined." Haha. So...she is passing the honors to Caitlyn and her amazing competition. I can't wait to participate!!!! Oh!! And I've already made you other guyses who didnt have icons...I made them. Wow. That was really bad grammar but im too lazy to go back. Also...I need to know 21st Century Rapunzel and miniemouse17's real name...if you wanna icon. Have fun everybody!!!

 

[Fairywings]

Okay, everybody! As you can see...Chacha has "politely declined." Haha. So...she is passing the honors to Caitlyn and her amazing competition. I can't wait to participate!!!! Oh!! And I've already made you other guyses who didnt have icons...I made them. Wow. That was really bad grammar but im too lazy to go back. Also...I need to know 21st Century Rapunzel and miniemouse17's real name...if you wanna icon. Have fun everybody!!!

All right, here's my challenge! I'd love to see what you come up with! No real people either!

Challenge: Come up with a Disney Animated movie and give it a title. It cannot be a sequel. Tell us about your movie

*Who are the characters? Are they humans, animals, plants, mystical creatures, or inanimate objects come to life? What do they look like? What do they wear? How old are they? Are they good, bad, or both? Whst's important to them? What do they like/dislike? What's their dreams and goals? How do they react to the other characters?

*Where does the movie take place? Is it a big or small area? Is it in a populated place or in the wild? Is there a castle? Where do the characters live? Do they like living there?

*When do the characters live? Are they in the past, present or future? Can they time travel? Do they know what the future is like or how the past went?

*What's the plot? How did the characters meet? Why is the bad guy making trouble? What are the good guys doing to stop it? Are the characters on a journey? If so, where are they going? What have the characters learned? How are the characters acting towards each other?

Try to be creative with how you present you movie!

 

[MickeyisBeast]

So I'm not writing this like an actual story? It's more like a plan like you write before you write the actual story? Because I'm just gonna write it in the sense of Who: What: When: Where: Why:

 

[Fairywings]

So I'm not writing this like an actual story? It's more like a plan like you write before you write the actual story? Because I'm just gonna write it in the sense of Who: What: When: Where: Why:

I guess I should make an example. Granted, this is merely a creative way of doing it. You don't have to do it this way.

Lancelot: Hello all, my name is Lancelot, Prince of Sirveilles. I am here with my fellow.....characters to tell you about our new movie, Two Worlds, One Key. I am happy to tell you this is one of the few royalty movies that's more about the prince than the princess. I'm also considered the hero of the story.

Felicia: My name is Felicia. The story begins when Lance's father, King Harold, is dying of a disease. His mother died long ago, and Lancelot, being only nineteen and not ready to run a country, goes to these three women, Faith, Hope, and Destiny. They are said to know everything. Anyway, he goes and takes this long three day journey only to find when he gets there that only one person, called the KeyWielder, knows how to heal the king, and they live on the other side of the world, but no one knows who this said person is.

Lancelot: Meanwhile, Felicia, the KeyWielder, is living in Miami, Florida, being bullied everyday and wishing she could get out of that life. So with a few obscure clues, I end up in New York City, where I hear of this 17 year old genius whose already graduated university and waiting to turn eighteen so she can move out of her parents house and be able to practise law and medicine.

Antony: Meanwhile, I, Antony, brother to the king and uncle of Lancelot, am finally taking over the country and ruling what is rightfully mine! I am so powerful, no one can stop me!

Harold, Oh hush, Antony. Lancelot will get you in the end, you'll see.

Felicia: Lancelot is finding that America is way different from Sirveilles and has lost hope until I come in to New York for a conference. He manages to meet me, but I don't know what the cure is, even after two days of working on it.

Oliver: I am Prince Oliver, younger brother of Lancelot. Antony tries to have me murdered, but I cleverly escape. I go to father, and he tells me to go find Lancelot and bring him back to kick Antony's butt!

Harold: You're talking like a New Yorkian again!

Oliver: Sorry Father. Anyway, I make it to America. I'm very resourceful for a twelve year old, so I find Lancelot with his new girl friend.....

Lancelot: Oliver! Felicia is NOT my girlfriend!

Oliver: Sure she isn't. Anyway, I convince him to come home.

Felicia: And who gets whisked off to Sirveilles with them? That's right, I do.

Lancelot: So! Will I defeat Antony? Will Felicia find a cure and really be the KeyWielder? Will my father be king? Or shall I have to take up the throne after all?

Antony: No! No! No, and No!

Lancelot: Shut up! You're a liar and a traitor! I'll never let you take over my country!

Harold: Couldn't have said it better myself.

Lancelot: Well, this is probably the big question you're all wondering. Did Felicia and I ever fall in love? Well, I don't want to give away too much.....

Felicia: But we will say one thing. It might be a bit cliche, but you never know.....

Lancelot: So that's it! Hope you enjoy the journey and the action with us!

 

[MickeyisBeast]

Title: Unknown Love

Who: Caroline has silky brown hair and gleaming green eyes. She's shy around new people, yet open with her friends. Her family cares for her, but she doesn't enjoy spending time with them as she feels she doesn't relate to them at all. She's your average jane, not rich- not poor, not smart- not dumb, not quiet- not loud, but she is beautiful, very beautiful.

Derek He's a Prince of an important and powerful country, but nobody really knows much about him. He's gorgeous beyond belief, with light brown hair thats short yet worn messily. His golden orbs draw you in and you cannot help but stare. He comes off as an arrogant prince, like he has money growing on trees, but once you really get to know him you realize all that is just his shield. He's kind and loving, sweet and romantic, but only few people truly know this about him.

Where: In a big and important Kingdom. Assumedly somewhere in Europe, probably France or Italy.

When: It's modern day, yet there's a Kingdom ruled solely by a Royal Family.

Plot: Caroline, 16, is sick of not fitting in with her family. They drive her insane and they're the total opposites of her. She likes pink- they like blue. She wants pizza- they want chicken. Nothing she says is ever right either. Fed up with her boring, normal life-style, she runs away from home. She has no clue where she'll go, but in the middle of the night, she packs a knap-sack with some clothes, money, her phone, food, and some important things and she sneaks out into the darkness.

Derek, 18, is constantly in training on how to run his future kingdom. Girls drool over him but he pays them no attention, nothing about them attracts him. Instead, he acts cocky and arrogant to keep them away from him. He throws himself into his studies to make his parents happy. But he often gets tired of the royal treatment- of being famous, known by all in the giant Kingdom. So he and his tutor hatch a plan. They give him a dark brown hair wig, clothes that the normal people of the Kingdom wear, and everyday he goes out and walks among his people on the busy streets- never getting notices and always treated like a normal person.

One day, while taking his daily stroll, Derek gets sight of a beautiful girl with long beautiful brown hair and emerald green eyes. For some reason his heart flutters when he sees the girl, sitting at a table at a cafe, sipping a iced coffee drink. He goes against all he thinks is right, and walks up to the beautiful girl. She looks up at him in fear, assuming the worst. But he gently looks at her and says hello. She whispers a reply and he asks if he can join her. Reluctantly, the girl agrees and the under cover prince strikes up a conversation with the beautiful girl. She tells him she ran away from home, because for some reason she feels as if she can trust the boy with her life. She warms up to the boy and eventually tells him her name, Caroline. He knows in an instant that this girl is different, and he feels like it's love at first sight. So does Caroline, although neither of them will admit it.

They spend the rest of the day adventuring through the Kingdom together. When it starts to get late, Derek tells Caroline that she can stay at his family's home tonight. Caroline rejects the offer, but Derek insists and before long they're headed to the Palace together. When they reach the gate, Caroline is confused. Understanding why she doesn't understand why they are there, Derek takes off his wig- reavealing his trademark light brown hair. Caroline gasps and takes a step away. But Derek tells her it's alright, and explains how he likes to be normal and how everything he had told her that day was all true. Caroline believes Derek and he takes her to meet the King and Queen, and he tells them her problem. They accept Caroline into their home, because this is the first real time Derek has shown any unbelievable love interest in a girl.

Once news of Caroline spreads around the palace, the other girls who always try to get Derek to notice them are angry. The leader of the group, Eimily, is furiated. She believed she should have Derek- even though she found him ugly, weird, and not attractive. She wanted his money and to be Princess and future Queen. Eimily wasn't nearly as beautiful as Caroline, in fact little found her pretty at all. Her rough accent proved her to be from somewhere other than the Kingdom (ie England, Ireland, other countries around there.) and she wore a blonde wig to cover her nappy dull brown hair. Eimily planned to destroy Caroline so she can have Derek for herself. She plotted revenge, and one day she cornered Caroline in the palace and tried to kill her with a knife. Caroline barely escaped Eimily's grisp, and ran to go tell the King and Queen what had just happened. But Eimily had beaten her to it, and lied, saying Caroline had attacked her, showing her bloody hand to the King and Queen, where she must have cut herself on her knife. The King and Queen had nothing to do but send Caroline to the dungeon and ban their son from seeing his love.

Derek visits Caroline everyday, trying to plan on how he can get her out of the dungeon. They come up with an idea on how to catch Eimily in admitting she lied about Caroline hurting her. The next day, Derek went to go see Eimily, wearing a hat with a video camera hidden on it, unnoticeable. He pretended to be interesting in Eimily, and asked her to be honest with him- did she really lie to his parents? She admitted the truth and leaned in to kiss the prince, but right before their lips touched, he ran off to find his parents. Eimily ran after him, trying to stop him, but he got there first. He showed his parents the video. Caroline was released from the dungeon and they planned to get married as soon as the possibly could.

The wedding was huge and grand, everyone in the Kingdom was there- even Caroline's family. Everyone, except Eimily. She sat in the dungeon, plotting revenge on Caroline and Derek. She vowed she would get them back. But for the next three years, there was nothing she could do but sit in her cell and wait to be released.

Newly married, Derek and Caroline drove off to their honeymoon. Truly and positivly in love.

 

[TheDreamsComeTrue]

Title: High Class

Far away in the small village of Noonville, in Narnia lived Princess Allie, Prince Christian, Amelia the evil witch who smelled like Pansies, and Princess Allie's best friend Sarah. Noonville is a small village where everyone knows everyone. With that being said, there are a lot of cliques. Princess Allie and Sarah are in the high class clique, where they hate the outcasts. An outcast is someone like Amelia the evil witch...they're odd. Some people in Noonville aren't in a clique and stay neutral...like the Prince. A prince? Staying Neutral? This was doomed to end badly.

On one bright and sunny day in Noonville all was going well. The high class people were being high class and making fun of the outcasts. While the outcasts, well were being outcasts. Today, though, they had a village meeting. It was going as planned, the high class were running things as usual. Until, one outcast decided she wanted to be high class. This is the biggest mistake an outcast could EVER make! High class people are not very accepting to new people. The outcast who wanted to be high class was Amelia, the evil witch who smelled like Pansies. The High class-ers were furious with her! ACCEPT A NEW PERSON? Ha. Never going to happen. All Amelia wanted was some friends, you see. Amelia was a very depressed person and just needed someone to talk to. The prince, being a kind-hearted person went up and talked to Amelia. He new that this would make his princess very furious, but he doesn't like being mean to people. Amelia was happy that someone wanted to talk to her and she decided to abuse this to her own good. She thought that the prince would love her instead of Allie and she would become high class...

For the next couple of weeks Amelia and Christian would slowly but surely become best friends. Amelia would act more depressed and tell him lies about herself to make him feel bad for her. She even told him that she was contemplating suicide, but Christian talked her out of it. She was happy she could say that he saved her life. She was pulling him away from Allie, and that's just what she wanted... Allie on the other hand was very upset. She thought something was wrong with her, why would Christian pick Amelia over her? Allie was very jealous that Amelia was talking to Christian more than she was. Sarah told Allie to talk to her prince about this, and that's exactly what Allie did. It was a very heated conversation. Christian told Allie that him and Amelia were just friends, and that he would always love her. Allie believed it until she saw them talking more, she had to talk to Amelia... Amelia felt so bad on how much she really hurt Allie. She realized that being popular isn't everything. She realized that just because the high class people seem mean they really have kind hearts and actually don't have the greatest of lives. She decided to let Allie and Christian be because they really did love each other....

Ten years later Amelia was sitting at Allie's and Christian's wedding. With Sarah, the maid of honor, by Allie's side like usual. Amelia wasn't sad though, she was happy. Just like Allie, she too found the love of her life...Tyler, and she realized that trying to be someone else is pointless. Being yourself is the best road to take, and won't get you in any trouble.

 

[LionKingDramaQueen]

^^^Great story, Sarah!!! And I hate to interrupt the challenge, but I have an announcement.

Well...first off, I feel extremely bad for not making the icons the right size andfor leaving out a BUNCH of people...so I made them all over again. It's the same thing...just a bit smaller. Also...I finshed EVERBODY's...I thnk. Except for the people who I dont know their names...or will join in later. I also wanna specifically apologize to Robyn, Sars, Timmy, Kelseigh, and Becca for having to use a different font on your username. I tryed to match it as best as I could, but it's still not perfect. It's because y'all have symbols ro apostrophes n your names so it wouldnt allowme to put them. Anyways...I apologize again to everyone...

Here's the new link:
http://s1138.photobucket.com/albums/n521/PrincessAbigail11/Writerz Thread Icons/

And here's the new password:
whenwillmylifebegin

^^All one word, all lowercase!!

Now...y'all can go back to the challenge...

 

[Fairywings]

Anyone else doing the challenge? Abbi? ChaCha? Anybody?

 

[mimiloveswdw]

I am, but I can't think at night haha. How long are you planning to keep this challenge up for?

 

[Fairywings]

I am, but I can't think at night haha. How long are you planning to keep this challenge up for?

Umm, not sure.

But if you're looking for ideas, look back on all the stories nd see if you can come up with something or mix different ideas. Just no using someone's whole idea, using real disney characters, or making sequels.

 

[mimiloveswdw]

Umm, not sure.

But if you're looking for ideas, look back on all the stories nd see if you can come up with something or mix different ideas. Just no using someone's whole idea, using real disney characters, or making sequels.

Ok...but just checking if I'm correct...I would have time if I did it tomorrow morning?

 

[Fairywings]

Ok...but just checking if I'm correct...I would have time if I did it tomorrow morning?

Well, if it isn't judged tonight, I won't be able to get to it until at least 4 pm, So i guess if a lot of people put in stories around now I'd probably judge around 9 pm.

 

[LionKingDramaQueen]

I'm gonna do it. But can I do it tomorrow?? I have to go in like 5 minutes...

 

[Fairywings]

I'm gonna do it. But can I do it tomorrow?? I have to go in like 5 minutes...

okay. everyone read this.


I will be judging tomorrow at about 4 pm in the afternoon. I will say when I start the judging. You have the rest of tonight, tomorrow morning and three hours in the afternoon. I am judging this late because it's convieniant for me and everyone else.

 

[mimiloveswdw]

Ok, so I had no idea how to do it, so I sort of borrowed your set-up. I hope that's ok


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Shine

Set in the past, in a powerful network of kingdoms. Although they are peaceful with one another, the kingdoms are very different. Some, like the main character’s kingdom, keeps its citizens very kept down with lots of laws. Others change with the times, and allow their rulers to make much of the decisions.



Lumina: I was always different from the others in the kingdom of Evertime. From the moment I was born my body sparkled when I was happy. Evertime was a kingdom where everyone wanted to remain the same, and here was a girl who was as different as could be. My parents abandoned me and it was up to the orphanage to figure out what to do with me. Once they found out I would sparkle when I was happy, they knew what they had to do: keep me unhappy.

Nurse Mia: Wait, Lumina, I need to say something. I was a nurse at the orphanage, and I voted against this. Lumina was a wonderful child, never cried. She simply loved to be happy. I worried what we were doing to her, making her unhappy. The other nurses didn’t listen to me, and warned everyone in the kingdom about Lumina. Everyone was to shun her, and if they had to talk to her, they were to be cruel.

Lumina: Since I lived with it since my birth, it wasn’t as terrible as it could have been, but it was so lonely. Nurse Mia took care of me. She would take me to her office, and have me play with toys, so I could sparkle, if only for a bit. When I was older, she became my only friend, and would tell me stories about other kingdoms, where differences are celebrated. I dreamed of living in another place, but knew Evertime’s laws kept me from leaving.

Nurse Mia: When Lumina became a teenager, she became very sad. After all, all the girls her age in the kingdom were becoming engaged or courting the boys, and Lumina was kept from everyone. There was one girl, Rayne, who was especially cruel. Lumina was obviously more beautiful than her, and Rayne hated that more than everything. Everything Rayne could do to make Lumina’s life terrible, she did it. But one day, everything changed.

Lumina: It sure did. Prince Hartson, from the kingdom Jero, sent out a call for a girl to marry. He didn’t need to marry a princess, and instead wanted to marry a girl who was different, and could bring fresh change to Jero. I thought this was my perfect chance! I was as different as anything, especially in my kingdom. I was ready to finally celebrate my uniqueness…and if it came with a gorgeous prince, even better!

Nurse Mia: I was as excited as Lumina was. It took all she could to not sparkle all the time. As a result, people were especially mean. All the girls wanted to marry the prince, but they were all the same, having lived in Evertime. They realized Lumina was their biggest obstacle to the prince.

Lumina: Rayne took action. She gathered up three of her best friends and said that they would help me find the perfect dress to present myself to the prince. I thought that everyone realized now that differences should be celebrated, and Rayne was finally coming around. Instead, they locked me in a closet, saying that I would never see the prince until “his wedding with Rayne.”

Nurse Mia: I was so worried. I cared for Lumina like she was my own all her life, and she was missing. I knew she was so excited for the prince, and she wasn’t even around. I knew no one would help me look for her, so I had to be very careful while trying to locate her. I couldn’t find her before the prince came into town, though. Rayne’s family were the richest in the kingdom, and they offered to have the prince stay in their home. He accepted, since he was a good and kind man, and would not refuse people’s acts of “kindness.”

Lumina: I cried in the closet, knowing I was missing such a big opportunity. However, there was a big flaw in Rayne’s plan. She had hidden me in a room in her house that no one used. But during the tour of her house, the prince stepped into the room and said he would stay in that very room. Rayne tried to protest, but her parents shushed her, since she was acting rudely. Rayne and her family left the prince in the room, and I was so elated at how the situation had changed that I began to sparkle and shimmer. It became so bright that the prince noticed light coming out from the closet, and managed to get the lock open. I came tumbling out, sparkling and shining and smiling.

Prince Hartson: She was the most beautiful, most unique person I had ever seen. I knew from that moment that my search was over. Lumina had overcome all odds and still found happiness in a world that always tried to keep her unhappy. She was my princess from the moment I saw her.

Lumina: Oh, Hartson, stop. You’ll make me blush. But after that, everything fit into place. Nurse Mia was able to come with me to Jero, and I married Prince Hartson shortly. We were able to persuade Evertime to change up some of their laws, and Rayne even formally apologized to me. I sparkle almost every moment of the day now, and I’ll never have to hide it again. That’s about it!

Nurse Mia: Lumina, I think you’re forgetting something.

Lumina: Huh? What?

Prince Hartson: I think she means, “And they lived happily ever after.”

 

[LittleCrazyGurl]

Can i join?