The Young Avengers: The X Factor (YARP Part 5)

The Mad Man: "Noooooooo!"

Jay: "Good job team."

Evelyn: She found her backpack and pulled out her first aid kit, cleaning and wrapping where Thora got bit. "What else do you need?"

Gordon: He turned away and left him to die. He fell to his knees in front of his sister, sobbing. "Please save her."
 
The Mad Man: "Noooooooo!"

Jay: "Good job team."

Evelyn: She found her backpack and pulled out her first aid kit, cleaning and wrapping where Thora got bit. "What else do you need?"

Thora: The lion had pounced for a reason. It was starving. And to take down prey, there are two different places to bite. The jugular, and the stomach. She had armor on her stomach, so it was her throat the lion went for. She had a large bite mark, and was missing skin. She was bleeding heavily.

OOC: Uh oh, I'm gonna cry

Nancy: "Hold on Thora..."

Tony: he called Steve and Maria, asking them to come immediately.
 
OOC: Uh oh, I'm gonna cry

Nancy: "Hold on Thora..."

Tony: he called Steve and Maria, asking them to come immediately.

OOC: Me too.

Thora: She took short, struggled breaths.
 

Doodle98 said:
Gordon: He turned away and left him to die. He fell to his knees in front of his sister, sobbing. "Please save her."

Evelyn: She face got pale.

Jay and Evelyn: They both were very worried.

Evelyn: "I will try by best. Hope come here! You know more about medicine than I do." She held her hand. "Come on Thora. You can make it. Your a fierce warrior, remember? You can live."
 
OOC: Feeling the feels :(

OOC: Hey, you were the one that made the lion attack her. But it's okay.

Evelyn: She face got pale.

Jay and Evelyn: They both were very worried.

Evelyn: "I will try by best. Hope come here! You know more about medicine than I do." She held her hand. "Come on Thora. You can make it. Your a fierce warrior, remember? You can live."

Gordon: He put his face in his hands, then rested his forehead against Thora's chest. "Sister, please, oh please be alright." He felt something and looked up. Thora was moving her bad arm just to comfort him. She ran it gently through his hair. This only made him cry more. "Oh Thrud." He took her hand and kissed it.

OOC: Crying now. It's not good that I'm listening to James Dean & Audrey Hepburn (Acoustic version) because it's sad and also about death.
 
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Thora: She started screaming loudly. She couldn't move. The lion fell on top of her, dead.

Nova: Nova ran over. She waited until Nancy pulled the lion off Thora, then knelt down next to the girl.

OOC: Me too.

Thora: She took short, struggled breaths.

Nova: "It's okay, the lion that was on you is dead now, and you have Evelyn to thank for it."
 
OOC: Uh oh, I'm gonna cry

Nancy: "Hold on Thora..."

Tony: he called Steve and Maria, asking them to come immediately.

Steve: "Let's go Hill."

Evelyn: She face got pale.

Jay and Evelyn: They both were very worried.

Evelyn: "I will try by best. Hope come here! You know more about medicine than I do." She held her hand. "Come on Thora. You can make it. Your a fierce warrior, remember? You can live."

Hope: She hurried over.
 
Doodle98 said:
OOC: Hey, you were the one that made the lion attack her. But it's okay.

Gordon: He put his face in his hands, then rested his forehead against Thora's chest. "Sister, please, oh please be alright." He felt something and looked up. Thora was moving her bad arm just to comfort him. She ran it gently through his hair. This only made him cry more. "Oh Thrud." He took her hand and kissed it.

OOC: Crying now. It's not good that I'm listening to James Dean & Audrey Hepburn (Acoustic version) because it's sad and also about death.

OOC: I didn't kill her. Just gave you an opportunity to if you wanted.

Evelyn and Jay: They shed a small tear. Unlike some of the others this was the first time they'd witness a friend possibily dying.

OOC: Aww I'm sorry :hug:
 
OOC: I didn't kill her. Just gave you an opportunity to if you wanted.

Evelyn and Jay: They shed a small tear. Unlike some of the others this was the first time they'd witness a friend possibly dying.

OOC: Aww I'm sorry :hug:

OOC: Yeah, I know. That was supposed to be like a sarcastic voice at the beginning but I don't write sarcasm well. And it's okay, I stopped.

Gordon: He threw his arms around Evelyn's waist and sobbed into her stomach.

June: "Let's get her back to the castle. Keeping her here isn't a good idea."
 
Doodle98 said:
OOC: Yeah, I know. That was supposed to be like a sarcastic voice at the beginning but I don't write sarcasm well. And it's okay, I stopped.

Gordon: He threw his arms around Evelyn's waist and sobbed into her stomach.

June: "Let's get her back to the castle. Keeping her here isn't a good idea."

OOC: Nah you did fine I'm bad at reading sarcasm.

Evelyn: She held Gordon tight and rubbed his back. Her face was grim.
Jay: "No... no. She can't. Come on, we're the Young Avengers! Good wins all. She's a demi god."
 
OOC: Yeah, I know. That was supposed to be like a sarcastic voice at the beginning but I don't write sarcasm well. And it's okay, I stopped.

Gordon: He threw his arms around Evelyn's waist and sobbed into her stomach.

June: "Let's get her back to the castle. Keeping her here isn't a good idea."

Nova: Nova swallowed.

OOC: Nah you did fine I'm bad at reading sarcasm.

Evelyn: She held Gordon tight and rubbed his back. Her face was grim.
Jay: "No... no. She can't. Come on, we're the Young Avengers! Good wins all. She's a demi god."

Nova: "Calm down." Nova shook visibly. "Don't worry, she might have just been knocked out."
 
The Villianess said:
Nova: Nova swallowed.

Nova: "Calm down." Nova shook visibly. "Don't worry, she might have just been knocked out."

Jay: "Sorry. Yeah, I bet she did. Come on Thora. You can't die.", he said with a tone of desperation.
 
OOC: Nah you did fine I'm bad at reading sarcasm.

Evelyn: She held Gordon tight and rubbed his back. Her face was grim.
Jay: "No... no. She can't. Come on, we're the Young Avengers! Good wins all. She's a demi god."

Gordon: "Ms E-Evelyn," he murmured, "I appreciate that, but I can-can-can't feel it," he sobbed.

June: She was getting sick to her stomach. That was a lot of blood. She felt like she was going to throw up. "C-come on, guys. Please. We need to get her out of here."

Gordon: He stood, his legs shaky. He took off his armor and shirt, then Thora's armor so he would be able to feel Thora against him, and hopefully, she could feel him too. He gently picked her up, resting her head against his chest. He choked back tears. "L-let's go."
 
Jay: "Sorry. Yeah, I bet she did. Come on Thora. You can't die.", he said with a tone of desperation.

Nova: Nova tried to give Jay an encouraging smile. She didn't want to say what she was really thinking.

OOC: Do you want the adults to show up now or?????
 
Jay: "Sorry. Yeah, I bet she did. Come on Thora. You can't die.", he said with a tone of desperation.

Logan: He stood behind Jay, tears streaming down his face. His good friend, why was this happening?"
 
Doodle98 said:
Gordon: "Ms E-Evelyn," he murmured, "I appreciate that, but I can-can-can't feel it," he sobbed.

June: She was getting sick to her stomach. That was a lot of blood. She felt like she was going to throw up. "C-come on, guys. Please. We need to get her out of here."

Gordon: He stood, his legs shaky. He took off his armor and shirt, then Thora's armor so he would be able to feel Thora against him, and hopefully, she could feel him too. He gently picked her up, resting her head against his chest. He choked back tears. "L-let's go."

Evelyn: "Gordon don't give up.", she said, struggling to get words out.

Jay: "Yeah let's go." He and Evelyn headed out silently.
 
Evelyn: "Gordon don't give up.", she said, struggling to get words out.

Jay: "Yeah let's go." He and Evelyn headed out silently.

Gordon: "I don't know what else to do."
 














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