The roaring 1920's

[BabyPiglet]

Theres the problem right there.

 

[coolshannie]

Theres the problem right there.

i agree

I write to much..

 

[catycatcat4]

i dont have school today! now im board


name- isabell Jack marsh

age 16


personality_ one word Rebel.

 

[CastawayJ]

BP and Coolshanie, we dont need you

 

[coolshannie]

If people are interested in writing, i will keep writing.. but if others aren't writing there is no sense in it.

 

[CastawayJ]

there are 4 of us

thats realy all we need

ps, if i post more on to the story it counts as a double post and that is something i dont like doing

 

[CastawayJ]

ive got some feedback

*I like it! The description is very good-- lots of detail. I like Mr. Anderson-- he sounds like a fun teacher.

Evelyn will probably have all kinds of suggestions for it, but she's a good writer and her advice is usually very helpful. I've had times when I've given her some of my book to read and she'll just completely tear it to shreds (not literally, of course, but she has gotten pretty close).

I'm flattered that you sent it to me twice! Well, not really-- I'm just saying that to make you uncomfortable. Is it working?

I'm excited about the play!*

*Stop emailing me. All u have to say is stupid crap that I don’t want to hear.*

*Pretty good so far. I don't really know where the story's going though. *
You need an editor. That's all I can say for now.

diem carpeam si possim

rjag*

*i want to know what happensssssssssssss*
*

 

[CastawayJ]

mick shouted out"this is a joke. why would we do something like that"

audry was quick to defend"hay thats the most interesting thing thats going to happen today. who els is going to change things up?"