Test.

[marypops!]

Oh no! Poor you.

I need to come up with a description of what Abecca Dureh should look like.

Oh! I'm gonna call the tribe, the Forbet tribe, and the leader will be called Al

 

[AmandaSparks730]

Ooh! I like, George!

Abecca...

Hmm, do you want her to be redhead, blonde, or brunette? Or even black haired? Does she have tan skin, or pale?

 

[marypops!]

I'm not sure on her age either... i'm thinking about 10-12, but thats a bit too young...

Al of the Forbet tribe (alphabet!)

 

[AmandaSparks730]

I think she should be 14-16.

 

[marypops!]

That would be good. Then she could be technically enabled, and struggles the first few days, because she has no technology

 

[AmandaSparks730]

Oooh good, George

Seeee? You can do it! (Or well...WE can do it!)

 

[marypops!]

Yes we can xD

I can't think of how to start it... well first, character development, what happens, names, descriptions, places, etc.

 

[AmandaSparks730]

Ok, first, you need a title.



THEN, you start with (this is usually how I do it)

Plot
Characters
Setting
Time
Main events to include
Character development
How to get to the main events

 

[marypops!]

Oh, Jessie suggested "The Flaberghasted Chronicles"...

Already made the plot (just haven't finished what happens in the end)

 

[AmandaSparks730]

You're almost there!

Well...do they get off the island? Or does she make her home there?

 

[marypops!]

I could... end it on a cliffhanger :-O

 

[AmandaSparks730]

Do that George, and I will scream.

I will be sad

THEN YOU'D HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUEL!!!

 

[marypops!]

I know.

I could end, just as they are setting sail! Then I would have to write a sequel which would show their dangerous journey to civilisation!

I want the girl to become friends with a spidermonkey

 

[AmandaSparks730]

SPIDER MONKEY!

I held one of those in Mexico! They're awesome!

George, you can make it like...a trilogy! Yeah! And I (and ok, Haz) would be your number one fan!

 

[marypops!]

That would be awesome. What would the 3rd book be about...

I could possibly write it like a diary, but then that could be a bit hard, unless I write it as a mixture of a diary, and non diary.

 

[AmandaSparks730]

Ohh that's good, George.

Like, she can bring her diary WITH her! And write in it every few days to tell anyone who finds it (or people back home) what happened to her!

BRILLIANT!!

 

[marypops!]

But I can't think of how to do it like that... Unless she carries a pocket diary with her, that she uses to write about what happens, but the diary extracts aren't what the book is, but is like a side story. Like it would show an extract, which might end abruptly as something like someone knocks on the door, and it goes back to 3rd person.

 

[AmandaSparks730]

Yes, good. Like, she brought it on the ship to document her journey, and left it in her pocket.

 

[marypops!]

Yeah.

The reason she never reached the lifeboats, was that she had to get her suitcase filled with a design clothing and expensive techno stuff xD

 

[AmandaSparks730]

You're gonna make her THAT kind of girl?

But she DOES turn into this awesome heroine, right?