So what do ya'll think of this song?

[Pink_Tiger]

So while I have a few minutes I figured I wanted to see what you guys thought of this song that I came up with.:

I've never been someone
to shine the light
never taken the stand
when the time and place was right
I just could not figure out what was wrong

tonight I hope
I should see
see myself for my glowing side
now I hope
they can see
see who I am
just like me

tomorrow my side
just turns around
I've only seen others
but now that all changes

now I see
see myself for my glowing side
and I know
they can see
see who I am
just like me

 

[JulielovesDisney]

I like the lyrics.

 

[CastawayJ]

sorry, can't like a song till I hear the lyrics not see them
good luck though

 

[TinkerTracy]

For my taste it's a little too ryhme-y and slightly young sounding.
But maybe that was what you were going for.
Music's a great way to express yourself so keep at it.

 

[PosessedEeyore]

i agree with castawayJ (=