Let me get this straight, Mrs. P. You want me to talk about the economy, you said to keep those two paragraphs, yet you said that the source I used for those two paragraphs isn't "a good enough source" and that I should get rid of it?
Just gonna do this one paragraph to try to fix things and then send it off to her. So she can edit it again and tell me it still needs work, I'm betting. 3rd time's a charm? BAH!