potc3:our story a fresh start!

[coolshannie]

Miranda was sweating bulets.. her hands and face were ice cold.. Jack touched her cheek.. " Are you sure your ok Love?" He asked again.. Miranda looked at him a moment and said...

 

[pacificnorthwester]

"I. . .i don't know." She said weakly with a nervous look in her eyes. . .

 

[catycatcat4]

miranda tryed to stand up but quikly fell but jack grabed her

 

[coolshannie]

Tears began to fall down her face.. " Miranda what's wrong.. are you ok?" Jack said with a worried look..

 

[catycatcat4]

miranda took a deep breth then said "not fair" jack then said.....


may be my last post
edit:good night no one is posting pluss its 1:30pm

 

[coolshannie]

" What's not fair? Miranda what's wrong?" He asked as he titled her head towards him with solem eyes.

 

[catycatcat4]

miranda tryed to stand up but coold not she started gasping for air

 

[coolshannie]

Jack quickly caught her.. " Miranda.." He said as he brought her out to deck where there was more light.

 

[catycatcat4]

he saw that she was very pale she gave him an unesay smile jack looked at her as sickly as she was she still looked butifull jack sat with her wondering what to do knowing

 

[pacificnorthwester]

Would they have to go on land for a doctor? He looked down at her. her skin was ashen compared to her usual olive glow, and her eyes were quickly losing there depth and concentration. . .

 

[CASTAWAYCAYCUTIE]

i dont think im gonna write here i have to read some stuff still lol....i cant beleive you guys ended the other one!! we should still write on that one too because you left a lot of ends untied....just a thought...well anyways hello im gonna read and write about my trip then ill post something...

EDIT: i dunno what to write! if it was the other one i could just go meanwhile jesse and josh were.... or something like that lol...but here i cant think of anything!! im gonna post on the other one too...you guys dont have to but i at least think we should tie up the loose ends(like is taylor gonna have a kid and stuff like that...)

 

[catycatcat4]

miranda looked tierd and sicker bye the second jack disided to get to land asap jack walked back below deck "ALL HANDS ON DECK!!!" he shouted "get up mates!"he shouted over and over as they fell out of there cots "whats going on?" gibbs asked "just get us to a port and port" jack shouted then they where on there way when jack walked on deck "jack"miranda said weekly

 

[pacificnorthwester]

jack smiled down more worried than he could say, "yes love, it's me. . .we're headed to port so. . .are you feeling alright?" He winced, stupid question. . .

 

[catycatcat4]

"its just not fair"she said as jack sat next to her



geting snack real fast

 

[pacificnorthwester]

"What isn't fair?" Jack asked nervous. Miranda looked up, smiled grimly and took a deep breath, "That you finally love me back and I'm. . ." Jack quickly put a finger to her lips, "No! Don't think like that! You're going to be fine, just fine." In slight desperation he grabbed into his warm embrace as though keeping the cold clutches of death away. ..

 

[catycatcat4]

a few hours later they where at a port and the sun was up jack walked out on the dock men with guns quikly came up and pointed them at him jack looked at them and then said "hold you fire mates"

 

[pacificnorthwester]

One of them, obviously the Captain smirked, "Why should we. . .pirate." he sneered. Jack met his gaze steadily, "I am here on a straight, clean business. . .there is girl on this ship who is very sick and I am going to get a doctor whether you bunch of beasties let me or not.". . .

 

[catycatcat4]

then will and elezbeth started down the dock helping miranda

 

[pacificnorthwester]

The captain stared as the beautiful pale girl was helped down the ramp. His heart ached for her, caught in an ethical dilemma he decided to compromise, "Alright the girl can go to a doctor but you," He pointed to Jack, "You, Stay on on your ship and when the girl is healed we will send her back and you will leave at once!". . .

 

[catycatcat4]

will and elezbeth took her to the docter the a few days later......