Photo Critique

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This is a Good shot, as it has a definite subject (the sculptures framing the window), but there is still alot of clutter around it. You could have pulled in a little tighter with your lens and added more drama to the shot. Also maybe a little more exposure so you can see the details of the sculptures. If you included the side squares in a landscape setup you would have some patterning with the smaller rectangles and then the large square, and some diagonal based on the angle of the shot.
Just my opinion though, and its still a good shot overall.

Matt
 
ok so I cropped it a little and tried to sharpen it.

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Im sorry, I didnt mean you had to crop it straight away, and I apologize if I gave you that impression. My point was to get you thinking about framing, lines, patterns and details. But, I can definitely tell the subject of the picture and it has a sense of drama.


Matt
 
Im sorry, I didnt mean you had to crop it straight away, and I apologize if I gave you that impression. My point was to get you thinking about framing, lines, patterns and details. But, I can definitely tell the subject of the picture and it has a sense of drama.


Matt

No no problem, it was just I wanted to see what a difference it would make.
 

I look at the photos I take in 2 ways, snapshots and stuff that's meant to be more photographic/composed. I think there always room for both as sometimes you want to capture the memory but you don't have the time to put a lot of thought into the shot. I was given the gift of a day long class with a group out of California, Capturing True Emotion, and picked up some great tips. I need to figure out to get my Flickr links to open up the picture here when I post to get some tips and insight from the folks here. Any pointers there would be welcome.
 
I look at the photos I take in 2 ways, snapshots and stuff that's meant to be more photographic/composed. I think there always room for both as sometimes you want to capture the memory but you don't have the time to put a lot of thought into the shot. I was given the gift of a day long class with a group out of California, Capturing True Emotion, and picked up some great tips. I need to figure out to get my Flickr links to open up the picture here when I post to get some tips and insight from the folks here. Any pointers there would be welcome.

We all take snapshots. Whether we share them or not depends upon how you want to be perceived as a photographer.
 
We all take snapshots. Whether we share them or not depends upon how you want to be perceived as a photographer.

I have to completely agree. I have thousands of photos on my computer, but only a few on photobucket and zenfolio.

Matt
 
I took this picture in Amsterdam, Netherlands
I loved all of the different building shapes, the canal, and the bikes.

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I like your shots and enjoyed seeing Amsterdam, thanks. I like #2 best.

I agree with others there are some details you can clean up, like wires and extraneous clutter. I agree on a slightly more cropped view on the statues, but I think your crop in pp was a little too much. I would have liked to see those side panels in the shot, but not the window on the far side or the gutter, etc.

I also think you can strive to straighten your landscapes and find better light when possible.

In some of these pics I think you could have added some drama and interest by, say, getting down on one knee and shooting through the fence or upward, downward, etc. I think you could have done some nice and unusual shots using the bikes and maybe the boats. Looks like you were on that track with the buildings in the last shot. I kind of like that smallest building on the left in the first shot. Maybe you could have done a vertical shot with the bikes out in front and incorporating the signs, all of which have a lot of color and texture, etc.

Besides the light, these are examples of composition. So if you want to improve in that way, read up a bit on composition.

The light issue is about exposure, and you could improve on that by reading up on it as well. Are you familiar with how to use your camera's meter?

Changing lenses will improve your perspective. As long as you follow the guidelines for changing them you should be fine. Don't let that hold you back from experimenting with lenses!

HTH a little. Everyone's got a different idea of these things but there are some general principals that can really help improve our shots once we embrace them.
 


One thing you could maybe try for overcast shots (i seriously hate overcast days for shooting) is to give it a b&w touch. Then, the lack of color/nice lighting won't really matter too much. I just did a quick process to one of your pics. I also cropped out the distracting foreground; and personally felt there was a little too much sky. I know that it's not always possible to avoid having certain things in a shot; or we sometimes don't realize at the moment. But being comfortable with playing around with your pictures in post-processing can be a great advantage.



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I took this one just because I loved the pattern...

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For something like this, a different approach would be to shoot just the tops (hold the camera over them, and point it straight down). It might not be the most creative of angles. But since the tops are level (not counting that front row), it could make for a fun colorful shot.

You could even play with dof a little (get close to the tops of the Passiflora cans, and shot sideways towards the cans on the left). This sorta gives an idea of what I'm talking about........


Marble Masterpiece by Scott Smith (SRisonS), on Flickr


And I'm saying all this to REALLY place focus on just those tops.
 
(i seriously hate overcast days for shooting)

Overcast days can be great for photography. No harsh shadows. If you don't like the sky, the even tone makes it very easy to select it in Photoshop and replace it with a better sky.
 

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