Dimplenose
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I received a letter from Virgin today as my holiday has to be paid for by June 1st. It was a very informative letter but one sentence just jarred when I read it as it sounded a little bit threatening.
"We must receive your payment in full by the due date. Please be aware that failure to do so will result in your booking being cancelled at the appropriate charges and we're sure you don't want that to happen!"

It would have been better if they'd stopped before the last "and".
"We must receive your payment in full by the due date. Please be aware that failure to do so will result in your booking being cancelled at the appropriate charges and we're sure you don't want that to happen!"

It would have been better if they'd stopped before the last "and".