I agree with the others regarding AK. When is your Nav'i FP+? Personally, I would RD Everest (or get a FP+ for it) and ride it several times if interested (at RD, we've walked on 3 to 4 times in a row without a line building), do Dino and Nav'i with FP+. I would then meet the VIP Tour Guide at FOP, ride it at least twice (if interested) and head to DHS from there. I think you are smart to drop EP from the tour and just cover those rides during your other planned days there. With wait times and walking, you were looking at at least 1.5 to 2 hours just to do those 3 rides in EP. DHS looks good and I wouldn't hesitate to re-ride something you like - with your VIP Guide, this is the time to do it! Do you have other days planned at MK? If so, what FP+ do you have at MK on your other days? If this is not your only day at MK, I would drop rides like Dumbo and Barnstormer from your VIP list (unless you kids want to ride these repeatedly). If you guide can't get you priority access to Astro Orbiter, I would drop that too. That line is a massive time suck. I, personally, would look at my overall vacation park touring plan and use my VIP day to ride any hard-to-get rides (FoP, SDD, Smuggler's Run, 7DMT, etc.) that I really love repeatedly. It's pretty fun to be able to walk onto FoP through the FP+ line 2 times in a row!