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[tinkattitude!]

In this storytelling thread I will start with a portion of the story. Then when i'm finished somebody else will post another part of the story. Please be careful not to write a part somebody else has wirtten. Remember you can add new characters but don't get to overbooked with them. And always follow the Dis rules! Also please stay on topic and don't jump around things remember it should make sence and the story should progress slowly not so fast it makes your head spin.


The Search For The Luckey Hat

It was a bright sunny day, SnowSally stepped off the main street monorail. Her green tank top and blue jeans almost stuck to her body because of the heat. She fiddled with her backwards hat to make it so it was perfectly backwards. Every so often a gust of wind would come in and cool off the sweat beating down everybodys face. The main street cheerleaders fell over each other on the pyrimad. Each ones face dying with thirst, there was a huge line outside of the emporium to get cool air. And every water cooler had a line in back of it. Her blue sneakers were drenched in her sweat, the line for drinks at the popcorn stand in central plaza was huge. She didn't bother to try and get in line. Snow sat down on a bench in the shade of a tree watching the people swarm through the plaza to wait in line at the popcorn stand.

Hope you have fun continuing this!

 

[coolkidhann95]

as coodisneyfan (keeper of the yeti) was counting the yeti's daily snow order
but was shocked as to find that the snow order was way to big and when the trucks poured the snow in disney ran to warn other players. but it was to late a mountain of snow almost drowned disney fan and her rare light blue sweater was drenched and she was sweaty from the heat but she new she had to warn main street players she swam with all her might she got on dry land in main street running from the avalanche she ran into snowsally and told her to run of she will drown!

 

[tinkattitude!]

as coodisneyfan (keeper of the yeti) was counting the yeti's daily snow order
but was shocked as to find that the snow order was way to big and when the trucks poured the snow in disney ran to warn other players. but it was to late a mountain of snow almost drowned disney fan and her everest coat was heavy but she knew how to swim and swam as fast as she could to warn main street players she got on dry land in main street running from the avalanche she ran into snowsally and told her to run of she will drown!

.. What does this have to do with the topic again?

 

[tinkattitude!]

awww man nobody replied to this thread, please people

 

[shellybellypolo]

.. Snowsally and the rest of the drenched guests in the virtual oven (LOL) didn't listen. instead they ran toward the avalanche! they were about to get their wish to be cooled off! but little did they know that there was NO avalanche! he was being dramatic! instead the snow piled like a lost cloud right in the yeti's cave! the guests were scared of the yeti, for they had no idea of his humoring act! when they reached the cave they piled the fluffy cold cotton candy like snow onto their faces and the sweat turned to ice. snowsally was relieved, but now she was drenched in a different kind of liquid! snowsally was VERY curious, so she took a little peek inside the hollowed out iceland. "H-hello?" she echoed out into the pitch black cavern. "ROOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRR!" came the reply from inside the everest hide-out. "ayi!" she cried out and stumbled backwards, and fell into the snow. she and the other guests were in such shock they couldn't believe their eyes as a tall, mysterious creature thundered out of the cave, his feet pounding the snow, making mini-earthquakes. out came the yeti.......
>>>>>Highlight to hear what happened next!: .... and he started to perform a dance solo! he told jokes and the villagers were in awe......
continue the story please! LOL

 

[coolkidhann95]

the yeti led them into his cave but all the sudden the cave went pitch black the yeti had closed the cave with all the guests in it luckly coodisneyfan was not she was swimming at tiki tiki island the she heard her purple razor
she ancered it then she heard the muffled scream of snowsally snow screamed he already ate shaymojack greenmickeydude and wwedude
but it was cut off thev yeti had caughte her!!

 

[shadow pirate]

It seemed as though fate itself conspired against the people of VMK. First it was hotter than 10,000 white hot suns, there was the whole snow thing, and the Yeti had trapped most of the people in his cave of DoOoOoOoOom, eating them one by one. Meanwhile, back by Tiki tiki Island cooldisneyfan was brutaly attacked by a whale and a herring for being so very, very egotistical and killing everyone off (or so she thought.) It was at this time that shodowpirate pulled out his rock-n-roll guitar-of-1337ness and started to rock out in the cave. The shocwave from the rock-out-loud-ness of the guitar caused a passage to open in the cave that led to freedom, while also causing the Yeti to get an extremely bad headache...

 

[Mcat]

Mcat just entered the park.She saw the snow and she said boy is it hot today.Then everyone and the snow toppled on top of her the yeti came roaring out of his cave they all ran to the empurium and there they hid...

 

[coolkidhann95]

in the clothing to disguise as yeties while coodisneyfan was in her room eating herring and whale meat

 

[shadow pirate]

(The following is not part of the story.)
(The following is also a rant)
OK, it is never fun when one person continually edits the story so that they are on the upside of life while everyone else dies hideous and painful deaths. Every once in a while, sure, people can throw everyone into a life-threatening event, but when it is consitently done so that everyone else suffers while the creator of that part of the story is having a grand ol' time, it ruins the whole point of the story. How would you feel if the next Harry Potter book had Harry sitting in an ivory tower having lobster and fine wine, while everyone else below is suffering horrible painful deaths. Would kind of ruin the whole series, right? See my point? (Rant over)

 

[Master Gracy]

ManorRecluse flinched in the sunlight as he walked out of the secluded gardens and rooms of the haunted mansion, he watched as the matterhorn collapsed from the heat, which made it collapsed...for some reason.
He decided that he was too hot and he stepped back into the ballroom and decided to go visit madame leota to get her to stop the heatwave...

 

[Master Gracy]

ManorRecluse flinched in the sunlight as he walked out of the secluded gardens and rooms of the haunted mansion, he watched as the matterhorn collapsed from the heat, which made it collapsed...for some reason.
He decided that he was too hot and he stepped back into the ballroom and decided to go visit madame leota to get her to stop the heatwave...

 

[coolkidhann95]

(The following is not part of the story.)
(The following is also a rant)
OK, it is never fun when one person continually edits the story so that they are on the upside of life while everyone else dies hideous and painful deaths. Every once in a while, sure, people can throw everyone into a life-threatening event, but when it is consitently done so that everyone else suffers while the creator of that part of the story is having a grand ol' time, it ruins the whole point of the story. How would you feel if the next Harry Potter book had Harry sitting in an ivory tower having lobster and fine wine, while everyone else below is suffering horrible painful deaths. Would kind of ruin the whole series, right? See my point? (Rant over)

ok let me show you what i was going for
in one post there was a sceane where i was fighting evil herring and a whale in the next post i posted i was eating the evil herring and the whale that evadently i had killed!

 

[Idol_Fan]

But Madame Leotta was too hot to help so Master Gracy ordered Idol_Fan to get some cold ice for Leotta to lay on. Only minutes later Leotta was no longer so hot. She gave Master Gracy some directions telling him to "tell everyone to calm down stay together and try to find a lucky clover, a horse shoe, an atom, a skull, and a jewel every where something bad had happen" They all started on theyr mission.

 

[shadow pirate]

ok let me show you what i was going for
in one post there was a sceane where i was fighting evil herring and a whale in the next post i posted i was eating the evil herring and the whale that evadently i had killed!

But, if you read your previous posts, you pretty much treat everyone as a bumbling idiot who's sole pourpose was to die. You have them going into the Yeti's cave while you're relaxing at the beach. You have everyone being picked off one by one by the Yeti while your taking a relaxing swim. It doesn't matter wether or not a whale or a herring attacked you (I was going to have it be a gigantic ego-meteor,) but that you are making it so that you're living in an ivory tower whilst everyone else suffers. See my point? BTW, where is this post with the scene of you fighting the whale and herring?

 

[coolkidhann95]

Mods Please Close This Thread!!


I LIKE ACTION STUFF!!
i try to make my vmk life like mission impossible three stop thinking im a snob!

 

[shadow pirate]

Mods Please Close This Thread!!


I LIKE ACTION STUFF!!
i try to make my vmk life like mission impossible three stop thinking im a snob!

Maybe I've been watching a different Mission Impossible than you have, but it seems to me that no matter what happens, you save yourself in the story while destroying everyone else. And how can you close a thread you haven't started.

Anyways, to the story:
So, the search began for the first of the lucky items, the lucky clover. Meanwhile, the lucky hat mentioned in the title was being worn by a whale at Sea World, which, at that time, was just thought to be part of the show. After much searching, getting lost, getting attacked by llamas with both lasers and gernades, the lucky clover was found. As Random Person #1 went to grab it, a GIANT ENEMY FISH appeared. It grabbed the clover and put it in it's eye for some reason. Random Person #2 appearedand attacked the GIANT ENEMY FISH's weak point, causing massive damage. During the fishes final moments (which should have been a lot earlier, considering there was no water in the general area) it yelled "RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIDGE RAAAAACEEEEEEEEEER!!!" and the lucky clover was returned to Madame Leota.

 

[tinkattitude!]

Mods Please Close This Thread!!


I LIKE ACTION STUFF!!
i try to make my vmk life like mission impossible three stop thinking im a snob!

Ok
Hello Everybody im the owner of this thread, im sorry to say but Disney I dont want this thread to be closed. A thread should not be closed just because of somebodys wants, I was very dissapointed when nobody was replying to this thread but then I logged in today and saw more people had posted. But looking through this I had saw that I couldnt follow the story bc It seemed like people were replying to my original post and not the person before them. And Disney we dont think your a snob, he is just trying to point out that your putting yourself infront, im not saying that is a bad thing as im not the one to start an arguement but I think your last post about closing my thread wasnt the best thing to do.
Thank you for listening,
Tinkattitude (aka SnowSally)

 

[coolkidhann95]

fine but i dont want people to think i always put me infront

 

[shellybellypolo]

... and they lived happily ever after the end!
sorry had to do that LOL