Girl's Thread: The Best of the Best

[3mtn-kate]

actually i'm outta here too everyone

night!!!

 

[I Am What I Am]

Hola Girlies!!!

What's up?

 

[lpe_bratz]

nothing really jade.

there's a number that keeps calling my house.. and i'm pretty sure it's brandon's new girlfriend..it's an indianapolis number.

 

[I Am What I Am]

nothing really jade.

there's a number that keeps calling my house.. and i'm pretty sure it's brandon's new girlfriend..it's an indianapolis number.

Why is SHE calling YOU?

 

[lpe_bratz]

Why is SHE calling YOU?

i have NO idea.

i wanna call the number and find out if its her or not..

but its long distance and i'm grounded from my cell so i can't.

 

[JulielovesDisney]

Hey everyone!

 

[Tinkerbell424]

Hey girls!
I need your help!!

Can you please proof-read this and tell me if it make's sense and sounds good?


Today's generation is big on movies, video games, and mainly music! According to Billboard Magazine, 90 out of 100 songs on the Hot 100 list are either Pop, Rap, or R&B music. Singer's such as Katy Perry, Leona Lewis, and Lil Wayne show up on that list more then once. Whatever happened to teens listening to The Who, Led Zeppelin, and Jeff Rotel? Whole Lotta Music will be a store geared to teens and young adults who want a taste of the good ole' 70s and 80s bands. Whole Lotta Music will consist of Rock albums and cd's from the 70s, 80s, and 90s eras. Furthermore, by opening on Las Olas Boulevard in downtown Fort Lauderdale. The reason I have choose Las Olas for my business is because it will attract the nostalgic adults and teens who dare to open their mind to a whole other side of music.

 

[JulielovesDisney]

Corrections made in bold:

Hey girls!
I need your help!!

Can you please proof-read this and tell me if it make's sense and sounds good?


Today's generation is big on movies, video games, and mainly music! According to Billboard Magazine, 90 out of 100 songs on the Hot 100 list are either Pop, Rap, or R&B music. Singers such as Katy Perry, Leona Lewis, and Lil Wayne show up on that list more then once. Whatever happened to teens listening to The Who, Led Zeppelin, and Jeff Rotel? Whole Lotta Music will be a store geared to teens and young adults who want a taste of the good ole' 70s and 80s bands. Whole Lotta Music will consist of Rock albums and cd's from the 70s, 80s, and 90s eras. Furthermore, by opening on Las Olas Boulevard in downtown Fort Lauderdale.<--Sentence fragment The reason I have choose Las Olas for my business is because it will attract the nostalgic adults and teens who dare to open their mind to a whole other side of music.

 

[I Am What I Am]

And replace a singer with Jonas Brothers

 

[Tinkerbell424]

Corrections made in bold:

Thank you!

 

[KidGoofy]

i have NO idea.

i wanna call the number and find out if its her or not..

but its long distance and i'm grounded from my cell so i can't.

Wait new GF...since when. I missed a lot

 

[JulielovesDisney]

You're welcome

 

[I Am What I Am]

Wait new GF...since when. I missed a lot

We'll let Lauren tell you if she wants.

 

[Disney.Ears]

I feel really young though...I wish I was 18 or 21. And just stay at that age forever

I want to turn 21 and stay that age forever.

i have NO idea.

i wanna call the number and find out if its her or not..

but its long distance and i'm grounded from my cell so i can't.

What's the number?! I'll flip out on her. xD
JUST KIDDINGGG!

But really, why would she be calling you?

 

[I Am What I Am]

I want to turn 21 and stay that age forever.



What's the number?! I'll flip out on her. xD
JUST KIDDINGGG!

But really, why would she be calling you?

I'm waiting for 16.

She's probably calling cause she's jealous because she knows that Lauren's 100x prettier and smarter and just plain better.

 

[JulielovesDisney]

I want to turn 21 and stay that age forever.



What's the number?! I'll flip out on her. xD
JUST KIDDINGGG!

But really, why would she be calling you?

Me too!! I can't wait to turn 21.
Almost 2 years!

 

[Disney.Ears]

I'm waiting for 16.

Ew why? What can you do at 16?! Hahah.
At 21 you can drive, vote, and drink legally.

Me too!! I can't wait to turn 21.
Almost 2 years!

LUCKY!
I have...-counts-, 7 years! Lmao.

 

[KidGoofy]

Me too!! I can't wait to turn 21.
Almost 2 years!

Nana I thought you hit that age many many many years ago...lol

no on a serious age joking note...stop rubbing it in

 

[JulielovesDisney]

Ew why? What can you do at 16?! Hahah.
At 21 you can drive, vote, and drink legally.



LUCKY!
I have...-counts-, 7 years! Lmao.

Those 7 years will go fast. Trust me.

Nana I thought you hit that age many many many years ago...lol

no on a serious age joking note...stop rubbing it in

Oh, you were talking about 21..see I'm so old I'm losing my vision a little bit so I saw 91. How embarrassing. lol

 

[I Am What I Am]

Ew why? What can you do at 16?! Hahah.
At 21 you can drive, vote, and drink legally.

I wanna drive. And I wanna be 18. I think 17's gonna be a sucky year.