TommyJK
DIS Veteran
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- Aug 12, 2015
Where is this original vision? I’ve heard the stories told about how there was this massive draft with a plan for the entire original trilogy, but no one has ever seen anything like that. Just a 2 page starter concept, a 12 page outline, an incomprehensible rough draft and a slightly less so first draft. And none of those concepts have anything to do with what showed up in Empire or Jedi.
(Interestingly, they DO show up in the prequels, if in massively different contexts.)
From everything I've pieced together/read, the very original concept came in his first 1974 draft which was an entire story, but this is indeed the "gobbledygook" version that Kurtz often alludes to, much of which is unrecognizable. But Lucas then made his major overall revisions/plan when scripting ANH for which he did the full script for ANH, then from what I can tell/have read he did the outlines for ESB and RoTJ.
He gave his outline for ESB to Brackett in 1977 to start working on the script from those notes and she finished it in 78 but died shortly after she did her first draft. And although some key plot points being different (Leia being Luke's sister, Vader being his father) the story is still relatively close. Vader searching for Luke to join him, the Battle of Hoth, Luke going to train with a Jedi Master, Han/Leia/Lando story/plot, Vader trying to capture Luke to make him an ally.... it's all there in Brackett's script. Then at roughly this same time period his outline for the final act was still similar. Rebels regroup to take the fight to the Empire and infiltrate their home world, where they're building more Death Stars (there is even concept art from this time period with the multiple Death Stars orbiting the Empire home world.) for Luke to have his final battle to take down Vader and the Emperor.
Anyway, I've gotten too carried away in this thread. Gonna step away.