Dis Unplugged The Ringtone

[Blumonkeyboy]

http://midishrine.com/midi/24228.mid
I made this midi file and i need some help with it. First off, can anyone tell me what it needs still? it is meant to be the Opening theme to the show,and i didnt use the whole song. I also couldnt fade out, so i tried a different way of ending. I know the bass needs some work, as does volume, but any help/ advice would be great.

(yes, i know my druming is awefull)

 

[Blumonkeyboy]

I have V2 finished! and i fixed several problkems, including some drumming. I also have an MP3 that ill put up, which sounds very realistic, if anyone wants it.

V2
http://midishrine.com/midi/24230.mid

 

[catycatcat4]

If i could put these things on my phone i probably would do this and just change off chorse i would change it in the moring b4 school then put it back on this afterwords.

 

[Blumonkeyboy]

http://midishrine.com/midi/24231.mid
Heres the newest version. Im still working on the drums, the rest of it seems to be falling into place.

If anyone does MIDI drumming, and can help, LET ME KNOW lol