Anyone good at rhymes?

[wilma-bride]

I'm trying to write a rhyme for DH for his Birthday surprise but it's doing my nut in - I just can't get the right words together. Anyone want to help?

Basically, it's to give him a clue (but not give away completely) what we're doing that day, which is the Segway tour at Epcot. So far, I've come up with diddly squat. I need help!!!

 

[BRobson]

I am no good at them-sorry. I am sure there is a poet out there somewhere

 

[pokemon_master]

I am sorta good at rhyming. It's all in the timing. How about something like this? It's bound to get you that one special kiss...

We are going to Epcot,
As you know well,
You might think it's great,
Nifty, or maybe just swell.

But I thought we could
Move with a little bit of flair.
It's something nice,
To take us from here to there.

What is it? Can't say.
Now don't boo or hiss
I'll give you a clue.
It starts with an "S"

Joh, How was that? I hope it doesn't make me sound like a complete and total.. Stupid head..

 

[BRobson]

We are going to Epcot,
As you know well,
You might think it's great,
Nifty, or maybe just swell.

But I thought we could
Move with a little bit of flair.
It's something nice,
To take us from here to there.

What is it? Can't say.
Now don't boo or hiss
I'll give you a clue.
It starts with an "S"

That is fantastic Matt - I would use it

 

[florida sun]

Thats great Matt,

Here is another one incase you can use two.

Your Birthday day will be such fun,
See if you can guess the one,
Hold On, Stand Up and Look out Straight,
Careful as you navigate.

What fun it is, for you and me,
Throughout the world for us to see,
Take it steady, not too fast,
We will surely have a blast.

 

[BRobson]

Your Birthday day will be such fun,
See if you can guess the one,
Hold On, Stand Up and Look out Straight,
Careful as you navigate.

What fun it is, for you and me,
Throughout the world for us to see,
Take it steady, not too fast,
We will surely have a blast.

That one is fantastic too. I would have them both

 

[wilma-bride]

Matt and Sue, you are both fantastic - thank you so much. I'm gonna have a play around with what you've both come up with and see what I can do

 

[pokemon_master]

Thats great Matt,

Here is another one incase you can use two.

Your Birthday day will be such fun,
See if you can guess the one,
Hold On, Stand Up and Look out Straight,
Careful as you navigate.

What fun it is, for you and me,
Throughout the world for us to see,
Take it steady, not too fast,
We will surely have a blast.

That is good Sue!! We are poets and we knew it not!!!

 

[tony64]

We're going round Epcot
I'm really not mess'in.
how we will do it
you'll have to keep guess'in.

 

[Hilary]

We're going round Epcot
I'm really not mess'in.
how we will do it
you'll have to keep guess'in.

LOL!