W.o.r.l.d.s.

[NABZD4815]

This is a thread that I wanted to make so I could get some random feedback for this story/book I am writing.

 

[Tinkerbell94]

OHHHH!!!!! I have tryed 3 times to write a book but i got bored with all of them. But thats cool. whats it about?

 

[NABZD4815]

Here is the preface and some info about it:

Preface
Hello and welcome to W.O.R.L.D.S., the intergalactic for six planets: Wayward, Onophoria, Rhetoris, Lemphion, Doraschiara, and Soroticas. these planets are formed by the balancing elements of the galaxy: water, oasis, rocks, light, darkness, and soul, should any element or elements be destroyed or toyed with, all planets shall perish and fail the promise to keep the balance made to the six forefathers and mothers.
This is the story of twelve unlikely heroes who saved this balance.
this is the story of
W.O.R.L.D.S.​

 

[Tinkerbell94]

hurry up and write it! that sounds great!!! I would put mine on here but they're kinda long..

 

[NABZD4815]

hurry up and write it! that sounds great!!! I would put mine on here but they're kinda long..

THANKS!

 

[NABZD4815]

my uncle has actually written a few books himself