The Story 2

[goofypurple]

I noticed that on the first story, you guys got a little TOO random. You strayed off topic about the 3rd page. So this is a new story. All the same rules but I will post them again along with one more rule for new ppl to this.

You can now write a FEW sentences for the story Plz dont write a whole paragraph or book. No double posting plz. I saw alot of that too in the old thread. Everything else has to be in () so we know its not part of it. Try to keep on topic and stuff. You can crazy stuff like pancakes fell from the sky though ok? I get to write a few starter sentences because it will start off the topic. I'll start ummm.....


It was the most wonderful day at WDW when IT happened. The clouds darkened, the fountains reddened, and the castle crumbled to the ground. "Oh my god! What is happening! Mom! Mom are you seeing this! MOM!" but she wasnt there. No one was there. No one except a peculiar bird. But it flew away before I could really notice its features. The only thing I spotted on it though was the cracked beak on the end. Then I heard an otherwordly moan and felt strength surge through me. Also a thirst ran through my throat. "An adrenaline rush. That must be all," I thought to myself. just an adrenaline rush. Or was it?

(plz dont try to add anything on to the strength and thirst rush because I have a surprise for that. Only do something like i filled a cup of mountain dew.
Mmm. Mountain dew. But seriously, dont.)

 

[PigletGurl]

I noticed that on the first story, you guys got a little TOO random. You strayed off topic about the 3rd page. So this is a new story. All the same rules but I will post them again along with one more rule for new ppl to this.

You can now write a FEW sentences for the story Plz dont write a whole paragraph or book. No double posting plz. I saw alot of that too in the old thread. Everything else has to be in () so we know its not part of it. Try to keep on topic and stuff. You can crazy stuff like pancakes fell from the sky though ok? I get to write a few starter sentences because it will start off the topic. I'll start ummm.....


It was the most wonderful day at WDW when IT happened. The clouds darkened, the fountains reddened, and the castle crumbled to the ground. "Oh my god! What is happening! Mom! Mom are you seeing this! MOM!" but she wasnt there. No one was there. No one except a peculiar bird. But it flew away before I could really notice its features. The only thing I spotted on it though was the cracked beak on the end. Then I heard an otherwordly moan and felt strength surge through me. Also a thirst ran through my throat. "An adrenaline rush. That must be all," I thought to myself. just an adrenaline rush. Or was it?

(plz dont try to add anything on to the strength and thirst rush because I have a surprise for that. Only do something like i filled a cup of mountain dew.
Mmm. Mountain dew. But seriously, dont.)

u just wrote a paragraph. that other thread was good, we dont really need this one.


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After that, I flew to my beloved island of Puerto Rico on a magical pirate ship. I drank mountain dew, and got an adrenaline rush, the same one as last, which was actually pluto running wildly through my veins. The thirst was actually sea water building up inside me after i nearly drowned when i fell from my magical pirate ship on the way to beauitful Puerto Rico.

 

[Disneylover 2]

Three miles shy off the beache's shore, I looked down and saw this hottie surfer dude. Naturally I waved at him. He didn't wave back. :-(

 

[PigletGurl]

The surfer dude saw this girl's sister, and came to her, planting a soft kiss on her cheeks, and she turned red as beets.

 

[Disneylover 2]

Upon my arrival a man ,who seemed to be a caveman, came up to me and said " I hate GEICO!" He showed this papaer that read :

GEICO
So easy, a caveman can do it.

He left with some tears in his eyes.

 

[MusicalDisneyDreams]

Giant waffles fell from the sky. The surfer dude picked one up and it exploded in his face. Then, the surfer dude's surfboard began to transform into...

(we have the other thread and the randomness rocked, IMO.)

 

[Disneylover 2]

....OPTIMUS PRIME! He then got a surfboard and started surfing.

 

[PigletGurl]

He forgot he was a robot so he short circuited after getting wet.

 

[Disneylover 2]

He blew up.

 

[MickeyisBeast]

I looked over my shoulder and saw the surfer guy walking up to me. Even with the waffle all over his face...

(I liked the other thread with the neighbor and the birds and the characters and the randomness, random stories are the best stories!)

 

[MusicalDisneyDreams]

I looked over my shoulder and saw the surfer guy walking up to me. Even with the waffle all over his face...

(I liked the other thread with the neighbor and the birds and the characters and the randomness, random stories are the best stories!)

(I agree! We should keep going on about giant pink bunnies!! LOL)

...he was still totally hot. But then he transformed into a hideous creature with tentacles. It was no hideous creature... IT WAS DAVY JONES!!!!

 

[MickeyisBeast]

Then to my astonishment a microwave fell out of the sky and out came a...

 

[MusicalDisneyDreams]

...baby dragon, which started spewing fire.

 

[life of the party]

its really not necessary at all to make a second thread for the exact same purpose just because YOU didnt like the other one. only a mod can close a thread for going off topic, and that thread wasn't "too random" its a story you make up as you go along there is no possible way to make it "too random".

 

[PigletGurl]

its really not necessary at all to make a second thread for the exact same purpose just because YOU didnt like the other one. only a mod can close a thread for going off topic, and that thread wasn't "too random" its a story you make up as you go along there is no possible way to make it "too random".

my hero. =]

 

[MusicalDisneyDreams]

its really not necessary at all to make a second thread for the exact same purpose just because YOU didnt like the other one. only a mod can close a thread for going off topic, and that thread wasn't "too random" its a story you make up as you go along there is no possible way to make it "too random".

my hero. =]

:yes: (C'mon, someone build on the baby dragon spewing fire!!! )