The Otherside of me...

[xlRacerXlx]

I'm just going to pray this doesn't come back to haunt me...

I have decided to show my sensitive side *GASP* since I most likely won't meet any of you, and the ones of the cruisetober... well... I'm screwed lol

please tell me if this poem 2 this girl alexis is good or bad...scale 1-10

Here you are, the girl I’ve never known
If for just once I could have shown
What you truly mean to me
Then I wouldn’t be here trying to see
The real you…
What that really is, I have no clue
But at least you’re completely true
To who you are inside.
Yea, you express that on the outside
With your crazy shoes and crazy clothes
And you know that everyone knows
Who you really are.

I think it’s great
All of your different traits
That define who you really are
Maybe I should take some time and drive off in my car
And think of all the dumb things I’ve said and done
All this time wasted, how you were completely shunned
I shouldn’t have been ignoring you
I could’ve been there saying, “Hey, I like your shoes.”
Or told you of your beautiful eyes
But instead I chose to love in lies.

So for all the times I p****ed out,
Please forgive me as I shout

I love you!!!

 

[nightmareb4xmas]

aww.. i loved it, and it was so sweet! i gave it a 10! Alexia is reaalllly lucky she has someone like you caring for her....good luck with it all!

 

[xlRacerXlx]

lol, thx for the good votes... maybe I'll try writin some more

 

[KlInger]

that was WAY better than any poem i could write. i gave it a 10!! good luck with everything! (p.s. it sounds like you have the same taste in girls that i have) heres hoping you get the girl

 

[Indi-Emma-Jones]

That was really good. Wish I was a bit more creative. Alexis is really lucky to have someone so sweet who cares about her.

 

[HilaryDuff9008]

I love it it's great!!

 

[petey's sweetie]

ok, i didnt really get it so i didnt vote... so alexis was different, but i dont understand how, i mean was she llike considered a wierd person to everyone else ecxept you?? Is she your girlfriend or just a reg person? but it was good poem

 

[BabyPiglet]

It was so sweet!!! I am sure Alexis is a sweet person, hope everything works out great!!!