Are you sure you want to see it? I mean, I'll show it...but it's so bad I'm regretting looking at it.
He tells her he comes to her room every night.
...SHE CALLS HIM A PERV.
um.
w.t.f.
He also "wrestles" with her.
...Edward would die before he even pretended to physically fight with her.
if that doesn't stop you,
http://stewieismyhomeboy.buzznet.com/user/journal/1644031/scripts-twilight-movie-found/
Gah, and they're putting Edward in dark clothes, EVEN THOUGH at the end of the book Bella mentions she's NEVER seen him in dark clothes (specifically black, and he wears that black jacket everywhere from looking at the pictures).
Seriously, if I was Stephenie, I wouldn't have sold the rights to my book for an adaptation. Make it the book, or don't make it at all. The dialogue in the book is able to transfer from written word to spoken word, therefore there is no need to change the words. It sounds as though unexperienced college students in a bad romance phase wrote it! Everything feels forced, he says her name too much, and everything is misplaced. He gains altitude when he runs (?).