DisGirlAllie
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Original: http://youtube.com/watch?v=Tx1XIm6q4r4
I have to go tell him! she announced and then she ran out of the library, pausing to give Sirius a wet kiss on his cheek.
What was that all about? Sirius asked rubbing his cheek and looking genuinely worried about her.
My dear Padfoot, cant you read the signs? Lily is in love and she cant wait to tell the world.
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Lily rushed into their dorm, her face flushed and her eyes bright. James thought that she was going to kill him.
"James!" she said excitedly and ran to sit by him on the sofa.
"What is it Evans? Can't a man wake up in peace?" James groaned and fell back against the sofa.
"Oh James. Im so excited! she whispered and then she hugged him tightly.
He didnt complain but he was getting suspicious.
Whats going on? he asked point blank.
Im in love James. This morning I found out that the man I care for loves me and I couldnt wait to tell him I return his feelings, she gushed.
James felt as if his insides had just disappeared. Lily was in love. He was too late now. Too late to give her the note he had written and too late to claim her for himself.
James, whats wrong? she asked softly as she noticed his pale and hurt face.
Nothing Evans, as long as youre happy the world is good, he said and then he walked out of the common room, leaving her to wonder what she had said wrong.
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James walked down to the Great Hall, hoping there was something there that he could eat and then get his mind off Lily. Damn her, he thought, why couldnt she have seen that he loved her? He was interrupted from his dark thought by Remus and Sirius sitting beside him.
What is wrong, Prongs? Remus asked as he spooned kippers and bacon onto his plate, followed by a round of spiced blood sausage.
Lily is in love or so she told me this morning, James said, his voice flat and monotone.
Remus gazed at his friend for a moment before realizing that something Lily had said had gone horribly wrong.
What exactly did she say? he asked trying to sound casual.
She said that the man she loved told her he loved her and she reciprocates the feelings.
Did she actually say that the man said he loved her? Remus replied.
Yes, she said . Wait, no she didnt. She said that she found out at that moment he remembered the letter and everything he had said in it. Lily had read his letter!
I have to go Moony, I almost made the biggest mistake of my life, James said and then he ran out of the Great Hall and sprinted the stairs.
Well, said Sirius eating a bit of toast, at least HE didnt kiss me.
fanfic excerpt. It's a James/Lilly one my cousin wrote.
Huh? That's why it's called fanfiction. You don't have to make it exactly as they'd talk. And this is from when they were in Hogwarts at 17. Nobody but JK Rowling would know how they talked all the time.that is not how thay would talk
and James is to much like Edward in this one
i would give it a 3, sorry
Best part. mugglenet has REALLY good fanfics." 'Well,' said Sirius eating a bit of toast, 'at least HE didnt kiss me.' "
xD
It's really good, I think.
Can any of you reccomend a good fanfic site?
I need one.
That's fine. I like fanfic but before I was like "WHY WOULD I READ SOMETHING NOT EVEN REAL!?!?!?" and thus I started reading the books and fanfic.Not anything against this one your cousin wrote (I really like the last line XD), but I just don't like reading fanfic in general.
It just bothers me to see those characters in a plotline that Rowling didn't set up.
Does anyone else feel this way, too? Or just me? :]
Sankies. I mighta came up with it.I love fanfic.
That was awesome your cousin wrote Allie.
hehe, last line was great.
That's fine. I like fanfic but before I was like "WHY WOULD I READ SOMETHING NOT EVEN REAL!?!?!?" and thus I started reading the books and fanfic.
Sankies. I mighta came up with it.![]()
lol. Well it's good.![]()
Valerie...Oh Valerie. Where are you Valerie?
Have you worked on the one you were doing over Fred and George you posted a long time ago?
The one that was sad.
I loved the begining and I wanted to read the rest.
Noo, don't read it until you read DH Allie. D:
It gives away information...LOTS of it. :O
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Cool.off topic but i was on muggle net and if i knew how to speak very good spanish i would be hunting down a latin american copy of ootp but i speak french
I want every book.
In Every language.
Children's edition.
Adult edition.
UKs version.
Everything.
Well the Adult books yeah. They are practically the same.
I especially want HBP it's so cool looking.
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It's kinda small but there is the adult HBP one.
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OOTP
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DH