Slow

[RyminWizard]

These boards are slow
but you guys don't blow
so who's gonna start the show
hopefuly it will be before it starts to snow

 

[TiggerBelle05]

hey! well every one is starting to go back to school so thats y.... it gets kinda lonley after a while

 

[Wick]

Too slow to no show and show foes that Wick flows at sick shows and tip toes on skitzo's.

 

[TiggerBelle05]

Originally posted by Wick
Too slow to no show and show foes that Wick flows at sick shows and tip toes on skitzo's.

huh? its way too late for me to even try to figure that one out

 

[Princess Ash]

It's not slow now,
Cuz, I'm here, wow!
This poetry stuff, is kinda cool!
But, RyminWizard I'm gonna RULE!

Fwahahaha! J/k!!!!!!!

 

[natty41]

I'm here too,
Cuz I have nothing else to do!
I should be reading my book for school,
But instead I'm sitting here on a stool.
Just chillin of the DIS board for teens,
Listening to "Complicated" by Avril Lavigne.
I must admit, all this rhyming was fun,
But, good night all, I'm done!

How was that? It was all I could come up with. My brain isn't quite up to snuff since school hasn't started yet!

 

[TiggerBelle05]

wow! man im all behind in the rhymes, i cant do 'em!
The Man I cant Have
im sitting here
remembering a cheer
responding to questions
giving out suggestions
oh whats the use
might as well put my brain to use,
im gonna dwell on the guy i cant have
man i want him bad,
it makes me so sad,
that im not pretty enough,
but with the compitition so tough,
when there are people with perfect features;
As i sit in the bleachers,
I look at the guy im not good enough to have
I think, what can i do to have what those girls have?
then i realize, he should like me for who i am
because i realize it would have been a scam
but when i pass him in the hall at that place
I realize, why cant i have Jace?
i think, i have to take the first step,
show a little pep,
it all starts with a smile
and it will make it worthwhile.
~Ashley

thats one of the 1st poems ive wrote that i wasnt supposed to write, ill prob fix some of it later, add on.

 

[natty41]

that's really good!

 

[TiggerBelle05]

tell me which one you like better! or give me some suggestions!
The Guy I Cannot Have
I’m sitting here
and it becomes so clear,
That responding to questions,
giving out suggestions,
Isn’t going to help,
oh what’s the use,
might as well put my brain to use,
I’m gonna dwell on the guy I cant have
It must be a passion
to have it make me so sad,
To think that he’ll be the boy I never had,
that I’m not pretty enough,
but the competition is so tough,
when there are people with perfect features

As I sit in the bleachers,
I look at the guy I’m not good enough to have,
I think, what can I do to have what those girls have?
Then I realize, he should like me for who I am,
otherwise it would have been a scam,
but when I pass him in the hall, at that place,
I realize, why cant I have Jace?
With his eyes so pure,
And smile so sure,
I think, what’s there not to like?
My friends say, don’t go there,
But you can’t control your heart,
When I see his face, something inside,
Sparks a plug,
I think, man I want a hug.
Some say he’s sweet, others say he’s sour,
But isn’t it my decision?
Sure he might be a jerk,
But there must be a perk,
For everyone down in their soul,
Has some gentleness behind their front,
Maybe it’s all a cover,
For some deep unknown secrets,
They say he’s a player,
But I say that’s just one layer,
Why cant we be?
Well I guess it’s a new century
So I think I have to take the first step,
and show a little pep,
because it all starts with a smile
and then it will make it all worthwhile.
~Ashley