potc3:our story a fresh start!

Ok Jasonpwns.. im sorry you dont like the way we have been writing our story...

And this is just my opinion.. You saw how we have been writing the story and could clearly see what was going on.. whenever we really dont want something to happen to a character we tell eachother.. but we don't say the character is sleeping until we get back on... i mean we could go through weeks or years through that time.. if you were going to bring a character into the story just by reading you should have understood that everyone plays everyone.. and if you were going to change it so that we couldn't do what we have been doing all along.. why even bother? :confused3
 
im back never go on a walk with your mom she made me go for a ride in the car she played nothing but dixe chicks they suck and then she tried to sing with the music im happy to be alive
 

no im not going any where and clear your messages and i bleive its your turn too write thanks jason you messed us up
 
the ship was filling with water and the crew was gabing every thing and takeing it off the ship that night they had made a fire they crew mannaged to get read of most of the water on the ship and they had to fix it and fast to keep the water from filling the ship next high tide they where still working late that night miranda was siting bye the fire with jamey who didnt seem to want to go too sleap
 
Miranda began to sing to her in her angelic voice.. Jack couldn't help but listen in aw at her beautiful voice..
 
jack sat next to her as jamey fell asleep miranda smiled at jack "must not be fun when the crew complanes like this"miranda said resting her head on his sholder
 
Jack smiled.. " Love if it really bothered me I could just make them walk the plank you know.." he smirked.
 
"doesnt the ship have to be in the water"miranda said jack looked at her and said"
 
jack smield down at her and kissed her he never thought once in his life he ever have any thing like miranda and jamey miranda smiled at him and said "i guss it wont hurt for me too be a pirate some times"
 
Jack laughed. " You aren't a pirate, you are just in love with one." He said smiling at her glistening face..
 
"wheres the rum?" miranda asked jack looked at her and said "yes the rum lost most of it when the ship filled with water" jack said "good" miranda said
 
Jack laughed.. " Hmm yes the rum is gone.. but as long as I have you I shouldn't go completely insane because you have a level of intoxication that withstands any amount of rum.." He said smiling.. Miranda laughed.. " Whatever you say Jack." she said as she shut her eyes resting against his chest.
 
jack looked down at her and then over at jamey "yoho yoho pirates life for me"jack sang"of course theres still some rum left" jack said the next day miranda woke up and seemed starteld quite a bit
 
Jack opened an eye and looked at her as she stirred.. " What's the matter love?" He asked looking at her..

sorry i took so long..
 
miranda still had her head resting on jack "jamey"miranda said as she sat up "i knew she get away"miranda said standing up jack got up stood next too her
 
Miranda gasped as she saw her daughter's frail body in the arms of a crew member with many around him...

( im not implying that she is dead lol)

and can you write on the old one? im bored..
 







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