Need some constructive criticism, please!

[oogieboogie]

OK, so I was trying out a couple new software that I got for free and I started doing a couple pages for my online scrapbook.

I'm welcoming any critique, thanks!

The 1st page is the cover for the Jammin Jungle Parade album:

The 2nd page of JJP:

Not really liking the Mickey up on the top left there.

What do you think?

 

[cynsaun]

I think it looks great Oogie! But, do you really want a picture of monkeyboy in your scrapbook?

 

[oogieboogie]

Originally posted by cynsaun
I think it looks great Oogie! But, do you really want a picture of monkeyboy in your scrapbook?

Well... you did say MB was hot! Better him than the six flags guy, right???

 

[musicalSaranader]

I think it looks really great Oogie. Have fun with your software!

 

[cynsaun]

mb is hot! but the six flaggs guy is WAY out of my league! he left me for a younger woman!

 

[Jolie C]

The scrapbook looks great, oogie! Very cute!

And it was me that said MB was hot and Six Flags guy isn't. -- You would definitely want a picture of MB in your scrapbook.

 

[edcrbnsoul]

This from a girl who lives in a van down by the river <a href='http://www.smileycentral.com/?partner=ZSzeb008' target='_blank'><img src='http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_7_8.gif' border=0></a>

 

[Jolie C]

We live on love, not money, Ed....

 

[edcrbnsoul]

And love is all you need

 

[Jolie C]

It better be.... You've seen the van!

 

[oogieboogie]

Yeah... that's a pretty beat up van:

 

[Jolie C]

Home Sweet Home

 

[oogieboogie]

Originally posted by Jolie C
Home Sweet Home

especially with the blacked out windows!

 

[Jolie C]

We need the privacy.

 

[oogieboogie]

But you keep the back door open?

 

[Jolie C]

We were having a party when that picture was taken. You were there, remember? It's pretty cramped without the door open if we have company....

 

[oogieboogie]

I got stuck at Kild's porch, unfortunately!

 

[Jolie C]

 

[calypso*a*go-go]

Originally posted by oogieboogie
But you keep the back door open?

Is it because of the gas ???

 

[Jolie C]

Bob admitted that was him....