HPRP 2- The AHCR JDs just chilling mourning the loss of oatmeal~ <3

[jessidoll]

Hermione:*touches ring appears in AHCR*I'm so excited!Hey Lewis!*pets Lewis*

 

[Fairywings]

Max: *sitting on the couch* Hi Hermione! Why are you excited?

 

[dizguy2319]

The train started moving, families and students waving to one another. Everyone seemed to waving…except for one. Maxine had found herself an empty compartment, and settled in. What to do for the long train ride? It had been a lonely three years for her. She wasn’t quiet or shy, by any means. She was more…intense than most. She had developed a reputation for being quite the troublemaker as well. It’s not easy to make friends when all of your spare time is taken up by detentions. She looked out the window, wondering what she should do. Study? No, there was no work yet. Read? Well…maybe. For the moment, she was quite content to look out the window, thinking about the new Quidditch season…among other things, of course.

Hermione Granger had also found an empty compartment. She settled in and immediately took out a book. But she wasn’t alone for long. Her best friend Ron and his girlfriend Emilia came into the compartment, calling out cheerful greetings. Hermione noticed Ron had grown taller over the summer…more muscular. Suddenly, another fifth year appeared at the door: Quinn. Emilia’s best friend. Emilia rushed out of the compartment with her. Left alone with Ron, Hermione became a bit flustered. It wasn’t long before she found herself agreeing to do Ron’s homework…even before the school year started! Hermione wished that Ron would see her for more than a friend that’ll take care of the school work.

In the train corridor, Emilia and Quinn wandered, making sure everyone was behaving themselves. Behind them, Melody called out, happy to see Emilia, whom she recognized. They weren’t best friends, but they were friends nonetheless. Melody talked with Emilia about their newly established prefect status, but she left shortly to wander the rest of the train.

Amongst all the crowded compartments, Maxine’s empty one stands out to Melody. She begins to talk with her, asking her questions as though they had just met. Melody had known Maxine for two years from Quidditch, but she never really got to know her. It’s intriguing to Melody that someone who seemed so shy had such fire behind her eyes. Like she had so much more to tell than she wanted to at the moment. Melody only left the girl when she had to—to continue patrolling the train.

Meanwhile, Emilia had found the third years’ compartment. William and Adam had known each other since their first year. Isabelle had known them as well. Charlotte, the only Hufflepuff in the group, was welcomed easily. Isabelle and Charlotte were a bit nervous. They were much more shy than the boys. William and Adam were adventurous, bold, and even a bit rash in their quest for adventure. They struck up a conversation with talkative Emilia easily. Sneaking up behind them came Quinn, who scared everyone with her seemingly invisible presence. Ron had said goodbye to Hermione elsewhere on the train and came to join them. The presence of another older student was too much for shy Charlotte, who got up to leave, but then crashed down. Ron, lacking much empathy, burst out laughing. The others helped Charlotte up…and Emilia scolded Ron. Charlotte walked quickly away in embarrassment, while Emilia and Ron walked away, fighting with each other.

Melody’s patrolling was distracted for a bit by Hermione Granger. She was sitting alone again. Beforehand, she had seen Ron and her in the compartment together, without Emilia. It wasn’t difficult to see that Hermione liked Ron, so Melody had assumed that they were dating now. So Melody asked Hermione. The Gryffindor pretended to be confused. She didn’t know Melody very well, and she didn’t feel as comfortable as Melody did with sharing her feelings with whoever was around at the moment. Melody left after a while…she didn’t know how to talk with Hermione.

The train started slowing as they neared the castle. Students everywhere were pulling on robes, putting their things back into their trunks, looking out the windows. Maxine wandered out of her compartment and meets Adam. She also bumps into Emilia, whom she talks to about Quidditch for a bit. The other students gather around the windows, readying themselves to arrive at Hogwarts.

When the train stops, the students rush out, finding the carriages. Charlotte wanders for a while before Quinn invites her to sit in her carriage, which includes Emilia, Maxine, and Adam as well. They talk about favorite teachers, favorite classes as the carriage pull them closer and closer to the castle…their home.




If there's anything that you're afraid I'll put in, be sure to tell me. Since I'm going to try to put more detailed dialogue in, and there's a conversation you don't want me to miss, tell me

OOC: This is so awesome. I love this part- "William and Adam were adventurous, bold, and even a bit rash in their quest for adventure." So cool! And I can't think of any parts that I want you to put in.

Adam: *touches book* Hey guys! *pets lewis*

 

[Fairywings]

OOC: This is so awesome. I love this part- "William and Adam were adventurous, bold, and even a bit rash in their quest for adventure." So cool! And I can't think of any parts that I want you to put in.

Adam: *touches book* Hey guys! *pets lewis*

Max: Hi Adam. How are you?

 

[Fairywings]

OOC: Love it! "It’s intriguing to Melody that someone who seemed so shy had such fire behind her eyes. Like she had so much more to tell than she wanted to at the moment." Total awesomeness!

Oh, and you should include mine, Quinn, and I think Emilia's conversation about Umbridge during dinner when we first see her.

OOC: This was my favorite part.

 

[mimiloveswdw]

OOC: Love it! "It’s intriguing to Melody that someone who seemed so shy had such fire behind her eyes. Like she had so much more to tell than she wanted to at the moment." Total awesomeness!

Oh, and you should include mine, Quinn, and I think Emilia's conversation about Umbridge during dinner when we first see her.

I thought it kinda summed up Mel's and Max's friendship...they're opposites in a lot of ways...like Mel kinda just says what she thinks, but Max stays silent. But on the other hand, Max does what she wants to do, while Mel stays safe. But Mel brings out Max's talkative side, and I think that if Max was in danger, it would bring out Mel's impulsive side too.

I'll include that, absolutely. I'm thinking of quoting exact parts from her speech and seeing how the characters react...so it's like they were really in the book (while Harry, and other people were also seeing her for the first time)

ooc:wow.....just wowI love the Hermione Ron part!Your doing amazing so far!

Aw thank you! I'm glad that everyone is enjoying it

OOC: This is so awesome. I love this part- "William and Adam were adventurous, bold, and even a bit rash in their quest for adventure." So cool! And I can't think of any parts that I want you to put in.

Adam: *touches book* Hey guys! *pets lewis*

Thank you! I thought you would like that part

 

[dizguy2319]

Max: Hi Adam. How are you?

Adam: Good! *starts to read 20,000 leauges, forgets that it's his port key, flashes out than back in*

 

[dizguy2319]

I thought it kinda summed up Mel's and Max's friendship...they're opposites in a lot of ways...like Mel kinda just says what she thinks, but Max stays silent. But on the other hand, Max does what she wants to do, while Mel stays safe. But Mel brings out Max's talkative side, and I think that if Max was in danger, it would bring out Mel's impulsive side too.

I'll include that, absolutely. I'm thinking of quoting exact parts from her speech and seeing how the characters react...so it's like they were really in the book (while Harry, and other people were also seeing her for the first time)



Aw thank you! I'm glad that everyone is enjoying it



Thank you! I thought you would like that part

OOC: You write really good.

 

[Fairywings]

I thought it kinda summed up Mel's and Max's friendship...they're opposites in a lot of ways...like Mel kinda just says what she thinks, but Max stays silent. But on the other hand, Max does what she wants to do, while Mel stays safe. But Mel brings out Max's talkative side, and I think that if Max was in danger, it would bring out Mel's impulsive side too.

I'll include that, absolutely. I'm thinking of quoting exact parts from her speech and seeing how the characters react...so it's like they were really in the book (while Harry, and other people were also seeing her for the first time)



Aw thank you! I'm glad that everyone is enjoying it



Thank you! I thought you would like that part

OOC: sOUNDS AWESOME!!!

Hermione and I started the DA last nightr. You should read Max's adventures in the Gryffindor Common Room!

 

[Fairywings]

Adam: Good! *starts to read 20,000 leauges, forgets that it's his port key, flashes out than back in*

Max: *laughing hard* Oh my gosh! That was hilarious! I think.......you should choose another book!

 

[dizguy2319]

Max: *laughing hard* Oh my gosh! That was hilarious! I think.......you should choose another book!

Adam: The real question is.....Where did I go?

 

[mimiloveswdw]

OOC: You write really good.

Thank you! I love writing...I wish the Writerz Thread hadn't become overrun with immature people *ahem* and we couldn't behave like human beings because I loved doing the two challenges that I participated in...

OOC: sOUNDS AWESOME!!!

Hermione and I started the DA last nightr. You should read Max's adventures in the Gryffindor Common Room!

Thanks! I think of this thread at work a lot lol.

Oh I read all the posts I miss haha I did see it Awkward...



Melody: *transports in AHCR and sighs* Hey guys...

 

[dizguy2319]

Thank you! I love writing...I wish the Writerz Thread hadn't become overrun with immature people *ahem* and we couldn't behave like human beings because I loved doing the two challenges that I participated in...



Thanks! I think of this thread at work a lot lol.

Oh I read all the posts I miss haha I did see it Awkward...



Melody: *transports in AHCR and sighs* Hey guys...

OOC: Welcome!

Adam: Whats up?

 

[Fairywings]

Adam: The real question is.....Where did I go?

Max: I don't know. Hopefully no where bad.

Thank you! I love writing...I wish the Writerz Thread hadn't become overrun with immature people *ahem* and we couldn't behave like human beings because I loved doing the two challenges that I participated in...

Thanks! I think of this thread at work a lot lol.

Oh I read all the posts I miss haha I did see it Awkward...



Melody: *transports in AHCR and sighs* Hey guys...

OOC: I love writing too and I agree about the writers thread

Max: Hey Mel! How was your day?

 

[mimiloveswdw]

OOC: Welcome!

Adam: Whats up?

Melody: Nothing...I've gone to visit Russell again...his face is still swollen...

 

[Fairywings]

Melody: Nothing...I've gone to visit Russell again...his face is still swollen...

Max: I think that night was just a bad night all around........

 

[dizguy2319]

Melody: Nothing...I've gone to visit Russell again...his face is still swollen...

Adam: YES!! ....er I mean oh no.

 

[mimiloveswdw]

Max: I think that night was just a bad night all around........

Melody: It was just...*shudders* everything was fine and then EVERYTHING went wrong at once.

Adam: YES!! ....er I mean oh no.

Melody: *glares*

 

[Fairywings]

Adam: YES!! ....er I mean oh no.

Max: *sigh* Adam, he might not have been very nice.....okay, he wasn't that nice at all, but put yourself in Mel's shoes. That could have been me or Will or anyone......what if I'd been the one transferred to St. Mungo's?..........

OOC: Max is trying to hide it, but she's worried it'll come back and be a lot worse(which it won't).

 

[Fairywings]

Melody: It was just...*shudders* everything was fine and then EVERYTHING went wrong at once.



Melody: *glares*

Max: I'm sorry that I had to be one of the ones who started it..........but I guess I paid the price for that, huh? *smiles weakly*