Help with wording

[jenmariejen]

Hellow Everyone!
New to the board. My name is Julie, I am planning a trip for my family to Disney World for around Chrsitmas time. We are pretending Santa came early to our house becasue we are heading out December 22nd.
I plan on wrapping a big box with balloons and a few mickey and minnie items. I would also like to include a letter from Santa or Mickey Mouse. I just need help with writting it.
I want it to be a fun letter for the kids who are 5(girl) and 8 (boy). Ive started with,
Your bags are packed and your ready to go, to watch Mickey and Minnie out on a show.
Then I wanted to say a little bit more lol but as ayou can see Ive not gotten to far. If you think that even sounds dumb feel free to make other suggestions.

Thanks everyone in advance!
-Julie

 

[PinballFamily]

Welcome!

What a fun idea! Christmas at Disney is truly magical!!! (Well, except the lines!)

I don't have much to add to your "Your bags are packed and you're ready to go..." note, but will think about it. Maybe "Our bags are packed and we're ready to go." to start??? I once did a cardboard puzzle (bought blank from the craft store) and had written on it "We're going to Walt Disney World on Tuesday!" on it with a glittery pen. They had to assemble it before reading it - prolonged the excitement!

One cheap/free suggestion is to print out big "coupons" for the box from your computer which might read...

"One free Mickey ice cream bar while we're at Walt Disney World for (fill in name)!"

or other food or souvies you might be planning to buy anyway, but help get them (even more!) excited.

 

[BernardandMissBianca]

Our bags are packed and we're ready to go
to watch Mickey and Minnie put on a show.

So put on your ears and give us a cheer!
We really excited to have you come here!

The Castle is lit, all sparkly and bright
I hope you love it, it sure is a sight!

So hurry hurry, don't be slow,
Off to Disney World, Here We Gooooooo!!! (from Peter Pan)

 

[BernardandMissBianca]

BTW, we will be there at the same time!! I hope you guys have a magical trip!

 

[jacksmomma]

Our bags are packed and we're ready to go
to watch Mickey and Minnie put on a show.

So put on your ears and give us a cheer!
We really excited to have you come here!

The Castle is lit, all sparkly and bright
I hope you love it, it sure is a sight!

So hurry hurry, don't be slow,
Off to Disney World, Here We Gooooooo!!! (from Peter Pan)

That is great!

 

[ZeroToHero]

Buffy, do you write children's books on the side? Or is your last name Seuss and I never knew?

 

[BernardandMissBianca]

fleeting moment of clarity

 

[ZeroToHero]

fleeting moment of clarity

....andddd...... it's gone.

 

[BernardandMissBianca]

exactly!! I lost it and it took forever to come up with "So hurry, hurry don't be slow" I had the rest of it.

I'm like go, blow, doe, foe, go, ho ho ho, joe....... it was a long way to slow.