help! Trying to do a mickey head, but not having sucess

[Cindy Girl]

Dear Disigners,

Could you please take my idea and make it better?!?! I am trying to do a mickeyhead for our upcoming Alaska trip. Here's what I have so far, but it isn't that great.

Thanks!

CG

https://plus.google.com/photos/1100...s/5838716258476661345?authkey=CIq-w6XrzbbikQE

 

[Lady Boadicea]

I think this got posted twice, here is my try: