Looking good!
My thoughts...
* I like the Typhoon morning / Epcot afternoon, but not Whispering Cyn for dinner. That is 3 destinations in one day outside of your home resort, and I try to keep it to no more than 2.
* Then you hop to Epcot after your AK day for the Biergarten. Can you move Biergarten to your Epcot day, and do Whispering Cyn on your AK day? That would cut out some travelling.
* You have a FP+ for Nemo. I would trade that for Spaceship Earth or anything else.
* 9:45pm Ohana dinner would be too late for us, especially after staying thru Fantasmic our kids would be dead.
That's about it! Tower of Terror on Halloween should be fun!