English Project - Need Help Fast!

[BabyPiglet]

Okay a ton of you know in English we are reading Romeo and Juliet. Well our teacher assigned a project. We have to put a quote from R AND J and then put a little sintiment or saying that relates to that quote. It's for Valentine's Day. Does anyone have any quotes and related sentiments for me?

Please help it's due tommorrow and I don't have a clue what to do...

Did my heart love till now?
Forswear it, sight!
For I ne'er saw true beauty
till this night!

Here's a quote I would like to use. But if you have other suggestions I will take them!

Please Help!!!!

Peace out

 

[PatriotsRule]

Wait, so you have to come up with like a modern quote that means the same thing? Or do you have to pick a famous saying or an already existing quote to relate to it?

That's an AWESOME quote, btw.

 

[BabyPiglet]

I have to say something more modern. That relates to that quote and explains it a little more...

Understand?

 

[tigger/winnie/tink]

sorry don't got a clue haven't read the book in school yet
But I like yours

 

[BabyPiglet]

You don't really have to know the play. Can anybody translate that quote to make it more modern?

Like Valentin-sey?

 

[DollfieDreams]

beckas "translation"

have i ever loved until now?
for i swear, i have never seen true beauty until this night.

it doesnt sound pretty anymore. xD

 

[BabyPiglet]

How could I have ever loved before meeting you?
As you are the truest beauty I have ever seen.

Will you be my Valentine?



Thats what I came up with...

Any good?

 

[Miss Jessr!ca]

i had to do this same thing last year. i hated it (but was good at it).
i cant do the second line in the quote you posted, its weird.

but here was one of my favorites.
Is love a tender thing? It is too rough, too rude, too boisterous, and it pricks like thorn.

is love really so sweet?
so hard, so mean, so loud.
then only ends up hurting.

haha not very valentinesy

 

[DollfieDreams]

How could I have ever loved before meeting you?
As you are the truest beauty I have ever seen.

Will you be my Valentine?



Thats what I came up with...

Any good?

well i like it...
the second part is just a little odd to me....-thinks-

 

[Captain Brain]

I love you, honey!

 

[Miss Jessr!ca]

well i like it...
the second part is just a little odd to me....-thinks-

yeah, you should make it rhyme or something

 

[BabyPiglet]

Well I really can't think of anything else. Does the Will you be my valentine part seem stupid to you?

I could cut it out...

 

[Miss Jessr!ca]

its not stupid...it just doesnt sound right.

 

[BabyPiglet]

that's what I meant...lol...

Any other suggestions to add to it?

I cut out the Valentines part...

 

[polysisterchick]

Did my heart love till now?
Forswear it, sight!
For I ne'er saw true beauty
till this night!

Has my heart really loved before now?
No. I've never felt true love until this moment.


love the quote.
good luck

 

[BabyPiglet]

lol...

The whole thing ot me seems like some cheesy lines some random guy would tell you...

 

[PrincessKally]

Did my heart love till now?
Forswear it, sight!
For I ne'er saw true beauty
till this night!

Uhmm,

Has my heart loved like this ever?
No, I have never loved till this night,
Where I will love you forever.

Will you be the one I love forever? (Happy Valentines Day) maybe cut that out IDK
ITs the best I got! maybe it works? IDK. lol it was an attempt hahah

 

[BabyPiglet]

This is my fianl project...

Have I ever loved before meeting you, as you are the truest beauty I have ever seen.

Will you be my Valentine?

 

[PrincessKally]

Thats good, Sometimes Shakespear is hard to make modern, I understand the difficult haha.

 

[Mickey1122]

OMG, I had a similar project in ninth grade..I really don't like that style of writing however 'beautiful and poetic' it may be...standard English is your friend!!
Too bad I lost all of my notes on Shakespearean quotes..Darn.