Bad Grammar in E-mail from School Superintendent

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The sound above is an English instructor (in COLLEGE -- note the previous poster's caps on this word) enjoying this thread. I have often spent much longer than I had time to spend proofreading my posts because a person in my profession is allowed far less leeway in such matters.

However, as one of the earlier posters pointed out, the difference in typing errors versus erroneous word choice is significant. I, too, see a difference in the inability to recognize the verb "assitance" from the noun "assistants." This is akin to the oft corrected use of "to" for "too" or "their" for "there." My students have not had enough practice reading and writing to know that the words they frequently use in conversation are hominems of the correct word.

In my writing classes, we have peer review sessions on editing that require the reader to begin with the last sentence and progress through the essay one sentence at a time, backwards. So many sentence fragments, run-ons, and comma splices have been avoided this way! But unless the reader has enough practice reading and writing, he or she can easily miss the hominem errors while looking at the whole sentence. I've seen it happen all too often.

To conclude: I <B>would</B> worry if the principal of the school had not had enough practice reading and writing. Perhaps it was an innocent mistake, perhaps it was a secretary's mistake, or perhaps it points to the deep divide between our ideology of education and its actual practice.
 
Originally posted by tmq2766
I wish I could be as perfect as all the critics on this thread. Heaven forbid you ever make a mistake. It really just sounds like you don't like the guy and this is just an opportunity to attack him. How dare him make a mistake!

Just to clarify...I never, ever said I don't make mistakes. I do. But if I send something home to parents, I proofread at least twice before it goes out.

I hold the head of a school district (who in my area makes almost 4 times as much money as I do as a substitute teacher), to a very high standard.

The mistake he made was one that never should have been made. Gramatical errors by a top school administrator????? I don't think there is any excuse. He should be smart enough not to have even made that mistake to begin with. If he is that careless in his proofreading, what else is he lazy about?

This isn't a part time employee..this is the big guy.

Now if he made a mistake when he was fixing his car, and wasn't sure of how that works, okay. Excusable.

My DH is the executive project manager of a construction management firm. He still proofreads his secretary's work. He shouldn't have to, but he does.

If he can do it, so can the top man/woman in the school district.
 
Originally posted by DemonLlama
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The sound above is an English instructor (in COLLEGE -- note the previous poster's caps on this word) enjoying this thread. I have often spent much longer than I had time to spend proofreading my posts because a person in my profession is allowed far less leeway in such matters.

My students have not had enough practice reading and writing to know that the words they frequently use in conversation are hominems of the correct word.

Since this seems to be the thread to correct others, should this be HOMONYMS, not hominems? ;) See, even college English instructors who do proofread are human(unless Im totally wrong here, which is always a possibility ;) ).
 
Originally posted by CamColt
Since this seems to be the thread to correct others, should this be HOMONYMS, not hominems? ;) See, even college English instructors who do proofread are human(unless Im totally wrong here, which is always a possibility ;) ).

This is fun!!!! Shouldn't it be I'm instead of Im:p
 

Originally posted by damo
This is fun!!!! Shouldn't it be I'm instead of Im:p

ROFLMBO!!!! Yes, it should. Im just lazy and dont bother to use apostrophes when Im typing unless it is something important. :p ;) :teeth:
 
:rotfl:

Makes me feel just wonderful that our superintendent can't spell! :teeth: :rolleyes: ;) :p
 
I don't know, maybe It's because it isn't my child's superintendent.

But I just don't think it's a big enough deal to even care about. So he misspelled/used the wrong word. He's human.
 
Originally posted by Allie322


Edited to add that you folks who actually get the red pen out and correct are my HEROES!!! I have been tempted on so many occasions but have never gotten up the nerve to do it!

When my DS starts school (he's 2 1/2 now) I will be all over everything he brings home like a-roni on rice looking for errors. "Assistants" where "assistance" should be is inexcusable coming from someone who should know better.
 
WOW......... Can you imagine if he wore white shoes after labor day? :teeth:
 
And people think we're bad?? Imagine the field day the fashion police could have with that!?!?! Way too funny!
 
Please... I'm ANAL about mistakes like that, and yet I've still found myself making them AFTER I've proofread once before and AFTER I've clicked "reply" or "send." Two in one letter is pushing it, but it's still not enough for me to think he's an idiot. I'm sure he reads and writes a lot of letters and has to do it quickly. Give me a few more examples, and I'll agree it's very disturbing.

Now, there is a teacher here on the DIS who can't spell or write worth a flip (as evidenced OVER and OVER and OVER). THIS disturbs me.
 
Originally posted by ckr
"As for the assistant principle "

Shouldn't that be principAL ??

Just thought I'd lighten things up a bit. No rudeness intended. :D

Oops... I just realized that this referred to another poster and not the original letter. This is what I thought was the second mistake. So... to edit my last post... it was ONE error. If he really thinks "assistants" is the correct word to use here, :rolleyes: to him. But, I wouldn't assume that; it could be a typo.
 
I guess what bothers me the most about all of this is that more and more these days, people use the, "I'm human, I make mistakes," angle to not care about their jobs.

That's just an excuse.

I'm so sick of excuses. Why can't people take responsibility and say, "Hey, you know what? There is no excuse for that mistake. I'm sorry for it and I'm going to do what's expected of a person in my position."

Wow, now isn't that a novel idea :rolleyes:

Whatever happened to pride about your position? Laziness and apathy have won out.

I'm not coming down on anyone here. I guess it's my frustration with school administration in general.

I really just think that mistake should have been caught.

*edited to add*

I'm not saying this man is an idiot. I think that's what he made himself look like.

I'm sure I'm too hard line. I expect perfection from professionals. Most of the time any more that seems to be the wrong way to feel :(
 
Originally posted by ckr
"As for the assistant principle "

Shouldn't that be principAL ??

Just thought I'd lighten things up a bit. No rudeness intended. :D

::yes:: I spelled the word incorrectly. :o I do have to say though, I don't live in a glass house. I make a lot of mistakes and own up to them!! I didn't like how the principal responded to her. He sounded very arrogant just from that one paragraph.
 
As an Educator he should be leading by example. Again, attention to detail is so important in positions such as Superintendant of a school district. Even these small things like misuse of a word in an email can be construed as haphazard, lazy, or plain 'ol not caring about what he's writing to you if, in fact, he did indeed compose the email himself. Again, he's an educator.
 
Again, he's an educator.

Since we're nitpicking here ... Not all superintendents are required to have an education degree. In some cases they are more managers that educators. Here, in KY we had a former army officer as a school district superintendent - no education background at all.

And,

Its not the school principal - its the school district superintendent.

IMHO, one mistake does not deserve a label of idiot.
 
This reminds me of a radio show I was listening to during one of New Jersey's many teacher strikes. Parents and others had been calling in to complain about teacher performance compared to the latest salary demands. A teacher called in to defend herself and her peers, and stated:

"You don't got no idea what us teachers has to put up with!"

What a shining example she was!
 
Originally posted by Bojo
IMHO, one mistake does not deserve a label of idiot.

Lack of attention to detail does not mean someone is an idiot. And if you look at my posts on this thread I never once called him an idiot or alluded to the fact that I think he's an idiot. And I do not think he is an idiot.

I just think that someone in his position who is leading an educational system should set a better example. A poorly constructed message to a parent does not look good IMO.

Kindly, please don't put words in my mouth.
 
Shouldn't "Superintendant" be SuperintendEnt ??

And shouldn't " 'ol " be ol' ?? (With the apostrophe replacing the missing d in old.)

Again, just adding levity.

:p
 










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