whats wrong with this picture?

[sambycat]

besides the swirly attempt at censoring?!?! am going to start printing this main body of invite for a wedding that we are paying for. does this seem OK?

 

[figment52]

besides the swirly attempt at censoring?!?! am going to start printing this main body of invite for a wedding that we are paying for. does this seem OK?

Isn't it normally referred to as "the Wedding Pavilion at Walt Disney World"?

Does Pavillion have one 'l' or two? I'm too lazy to look it up.lol

 

[BecBennett]

Personally I think the top font should be the same as the bottom one, with just the names in the big fancy curly font.

But that's just how I'd do it, if you prefer it that way, then by all means do it that way.

 

[sambycat]

its one "l" ut rhat does look good weird to me!! i like the bottom font, but its awfully heavy for top and bottom, the curly 'albermarle swirl' on the top repeats on our STDs and the RSVP portion and the little insert thingy that has site info and the DFTW website link. That font isn't bold enough when enlarged i thought to be our names? The "circus-y" one i just liked and i did want to do something with all different fonts, it looks overly plain to me when they are all one, but that font is too busy to make any smaller - hard to read!

i guess i put the "wdw's wedding pavilion" part because i think saying wedding pavilion is more helpful than the street address in this instance but just wedding pavilion seemed to short! maybe i will try it wothout that phrase and see if i can increase the font size?

 

[pixie921]

Personally I think the top font should be the same as the bottom one, with just the names in the big fancy curly font.

But that's just how I'd do it, if you prefer it that way, then by all means do it that way.

I agree. I think the 3 fonts is a little too busy. But I also think (and this is just my .02) that the bottom font is too circus-y for a formal event at the WP. I'd stick with the top one and the fancy one for your names.

Oh, and if you're sticking to tradition ... the bride's name gets to be listed first!

 

[Brit_Jude]

You could also try:

The Wedding Pavilion
Walt Disney World's Grand Floridian Resort​

 

[sambycat]

i think the suggestion about rephrasing the location is good! i had a friend tell me the grooms name comes first - i get confused by that!

thanks all!