Thesis Statement - Planing WDW trip

[Carrieannew]

Hey Everyone

Need help creating a catchy thesis statment for my essay due tonight!! So I am doing an essay about planing a WDW vacation.... But really am never good with picking a good thesis statement.

Any suggestions??? You dis'ers rock and I know you can help!!

Thanks
Carrie

 

[Phrebert]

"Financial Ramifications of the planned sojourn south of the 29th parallel."

 

[Carrieannew]

"Financial Ramifications of the planned sojourn south of the 29th parallel."

woah... hmmm
welll.. ummm .. ahhh

 

[Carrieannew]

 

[pearlieq]

Is this for high school? Is it supposed to be in informative/research paper or a persuasive essay?

If it's an informative paper, your thesis could be pretty easily stated as "The most important factors to consider when planning a WDW vacation are A, B, and C", with the variables being things like lodging, transportation, budget, dining options, or the like.

If it's a persuasive essay, it depends on what you're trying to persuade people to do. Are you trying to persuade them to take a WDW vacation or trying to sell them on the value of thorough pre-planning for their vacation?

 

[Carrieannew]

Is this for high school? Is it supposed to be in informative/research paper or a persuasive essay?

If it's an informative paper, your thesis could be pretty easily stated as "The most important factors to consider when planning a WDW vacation are A, B, and C", with the variables being things like lodging, transportation, budget, dining options, or the like.

If it's a persuasive essay, it depends on what you're trying to persuade people to do. Are you trying to persuade them to take a WDW vacation or trying to sell them on the value of thorough pre-planning for their vacation?

Its a college essay. This is only my second online class. It is more of an informative paper and those suggestions are awesome. The rough draft went in last week and I met with my tutor last night and I knew my thesis was lacking. Those suggestions are awesome.thanks!

 

[pearlieq]

Its a college essay. This is only my second online class. It is more of an informative paper and those suggestions are awesome. The rough draft went in last week and I met with my tutor last night and I knew my thesis was lacking. Those suggestions are awesome.thanks!

Good luck on the paper!

 

[Briarmom]

If it's an informative paper, your thesis could be pretty easily stated as "The most important factors to consider when planning a WDW vacation are A, B, and C", with the variables being things like lodging, transportation, budget, dining options, or the like.

This is what I was going to suggest.
Good luck!