The Writing Thread !

[bouncytigger22]

i cant find my story. BOO!! hmm.. i could make up something.

When a childs face lights up with excitement for the first time, you know you've brought him to the right place. He runs up to mickey mouse and gives him a big hug, and mickey gives one back. The child cant stop talking about when he met mickey, and how he wants to meet minnie mouse so much. When he finally does, he whispers in her ear "Minnie, you are so pretty." Minnie blushes and pats his head with her hand.

I just made that up. horrible i know.

 

[::Snow_White::]

I loved that Jessica! [I think your name is Jessica..]

No. I like Katie.

Hmm. I'll make a disney one now. It's about a guy.

The feeling of extrodinary excitment.
The smell of the main street popcorn, and cotton candy.
The freezing touch of the slick chocolate Mickey bar across your lips.
Your eyes gazing upon the magnificent building that lies ahead. The building you've been longing to see for such a long period of time.
You walk. Joy explodes from your heart as you approach what you've been waiting to see since you were a small infant.
When you first saw the picture of the building in your warm kitchen TV that winters day.
"Mommy look, it's a parade. Where are they at mommy?" You'd call to your loving caregiver.
"Walt Disney World sweetie. And you see that, that castle way back there. That's cinderella's castle." She would respond.
Your eyes widen, your face lit up. "Mommy...I want to go there someday."
And someday you shall. That someday was today. Every emotion, every concern, every fear just seems to melt away like a candle.
"So Dad. Is it everything you imagined." A tall young man sits his hand carefully on your shoulder as you stop breathless in front of it's tall entrance.
"Even better son. Even better."
~Cinderella's Castle~

 

[epchicax3]

heres a poem i wrote;

he's home from work
yet another bad day.
he throws his stuff
she'll have to pay.

she takes a deep breath
and closes her eyes
as she runs up the stairs
she tries to hide.

he opens the door
she's under the bed
shaking with fear
her clothes stained red.

he hits her hard
she can feel it swell.
its just another day
living in hell.

her moms not home
so he beats her more
"you've ruined my life
you stupid #####.

now you'll have to pay
for everything that's gone wrong."
she closes her eyes,
hopes it wont take long.

her eyes are black
her mouth is red
he beats her more
theres cuts in her head.

"im sorry daddy!
why are you doing this to me?
i've left you alone
why can't you let me be?"

her speech is cut short
-another kid dead.
on her grave
lay roses red.



It's probably the worst thing I've written, but I wrote it so I thought I'd add it. it's not about me. I was watching tv and this kid was abused... so it got me thinking and I came up with this. i wrote it so people can be aware that this stuff really does happen, as horrible as it may be and hope people dont do it.

 

[bouncytigger22]

i just wrote this one last night.


it's call I'll wait for you.

I'll wait for you. I'll wait for you in the gates of heaven. When I see you, we are going to run around in circles, pretending we are children. And then I'll know that we belong together, and that the time I had to wait for you was worth it. And we can act like we are twenty, even though we grew old together, and I will know that I am in the right place, with the right person. I'll wait for you, my love.

You guys inspired me to write.
It's partly because of my grandpa, who died about a month ago.

 

[Loves Disney]

I'm always writing. In high school I took creative writing and two honors composition classes. Now I am entering college as an English major and I plan to take many more courses focused on writing. It's a passion of mine.

 

[tigger/winnie/tink]

in my Sig i have a link to my writing nothing has been validated though it takes ten day blah i write poetry and fanfic the other day i wrote a pom about how intimidating a piece of blank paper is it was stupid but I'll post it sigh

I stare down at my paper
I hear in my head Write Write
Laughing in my face like Bellatrix lestrange
plain and white its stares at me
my pencil in my hand wanting to be glided across the paper
but yet i can't all my thoughts gone
daydreams had flown away
i sat there wanting to write needing something to do
its really stupid

 

[DollfieDreams]

i adore writing. from original stories to fanfics and even small challenge fics. im going into college to major in english and minor in creative writing. my only problem is im a little bit of a procrastinator, so it takes me some time to write, but when i do i let loose with tons of details.

 

[hidmickey:myantidrug]

I loved that Jessica! [I think your name is Jessica..]

No. I like Katie.

Hmm. I'll make a disney one now. It's about a guy.

The feeling of extrodinary excitment.
The smell of the main street popcorn, and cotton candy.
The freezing touch of the slick chocolate Mickey bar across your lips.
Your eyes gazing upon the magnificent building that lies ahead. The building you've been longing to see for such a long period of time.
You walk. Joy explodes from your heart as you approach what you've been waiting to see since you were a small infant.
When you first saw the picture of the building in your warm kitchen TV that winters day.
"Mommy look, it's a parade. Where are they at mommy?" You'd call to your loving caregiver.
"Walt Disney World sweetie. And you see that, that castle way back there. That's cinderella's castle." She would respond.
Your eyes widen, your face lit up. "Mommy...I want to go there someday."
And someday you shall. That someday was today. Every emotion, every concern, every fear just seems to melt away like a candle.
"So Dad. Is it everything you imagined." A tall young man sits his hand carefully on your shoulder as you stop breathless in front of it's tall entrance.
"Even better son. Even better."
~Cinderella's Castle~

Thanks . And yup, that is my name.

I love yours, too. I especially like the end.

There hasn't been a single piece on here that I haven't liked - although many for different reasons..

 

[::Snow_White::]

Thanks.

Ah, this has encouraged me to go write some more. :]
I shall.

 

[bouncytigger22]

Thanks.

Ah, this has encouraged me to go write some more. :]
I shall.

did you read my story? i shall post it again.
KAYLA INSPIRED ME TO SAY SHALL.

 

[bouncytigger22]

Oh summertime


oh summertime, please dont go. It seems like just yesterday we were running out from the school doors, so excited to start the summertime. Now, we only have a couple days until we will walk back into those doors. Oh summertime, dont leave yet.

i just made that up now. well, i wrote it down in my story book just now xD

 

[::Snow_White::]

I like them both very much.

Shall...Shall. SHALL. I like that word.

Snowflakes slide down my clear glass window.
Falling from the grey gloomy clouds above.
I hear it. The rain, it taps upon the top of the house.
Soothing it sounds. The cold winter mornings have arrived.
Slick Icy roads. Be careful. Snowball fights and a snowman.
With buttons as eyes and a carrot as a nose.
Skating on the fishing pond. It's water is clear as day through the solid ice.
Those frozen winter days, end as the brightly lit sun behind the clouds set.
Take a seat beside the woodstove as you sip on your warm hot chocolate.
As you take a nap under your wool blanket. It's winter.

 

[Tinkerrat]

i love to write
right now i'm writing a fanfic for potc
i am on my 134 page

i write all the time
if i don't write i'll go crazy
i would love it if any of you guys who write anything post a link or post it on here i would love to read it