T-shirt Design... thoughts?

[FosterLovesMickey]

First time I've posted on this board .. and, I hope it is okay. I'm working on some shirts for our upcoming trip ... And, I wanted to share a current design to see what you guys think...

It is our first 'family' trip, but I'm really tempted to remove the '1st' ... for some reason it is just bugging me... lol

 

[Dom13]

Looks like you're off to a great start! Cute design. Two suggestions to help with the 1st.

1. Try a different font for 1st Foster Family Trip. The "Disney Font" is a display font intended for use in small amounts like "Disney 2013". If you take a look at Disney's stuff even they don't use it for much as it's difficult to read.

2. Try super scripting the st. Making it smaller and above the base line might help.

 

[Dom13]

Had a few minutes so I took the liberty of copying your picture and altering it to show you what I meant. The font I used was Bookman Old Style. I had to adjust the kerning, the spacing between the letters a little, to get the "st" to look right.

 

[FosterLovesMickey]

Had a few minutes so I took the liberty of copying your picture and altering it to show you what I meant. The font I used was Bookman Old Style. I had to adjust the kerning, the spacing between the letters a little, to get the "st" to look right.

What a lovely change - thank you for the suggestion!!!!!