Rack Up Your Post With Random Stuff Part 3

[kjkcool]

i cant start it
i just cant
i'm crap at starting it
butonce i have im ok

now im stuck on starting it

I know!!!That's how it is with me.Once I get the beginning,I can work with it without a problem!

 

[CrazyChik]

errmmm
CAN'T BLOODY START THIS BLOODY WRITING

 

[kjkcool]

What's the topic?!Maybe I could help.

 

[CrazyChik]

i have to describe a place
so i have this picture inb my mind
it's an eerie moor
and i know what i want to do
i just cant start it

 

[marypops!]

no really, i'm good at art but not creative writing

 

[kjkcool]

eerie moors aren't exactly around here,sorry!lol

 

[CrazyChik]

uurrgghhh heres my start

The fog rolled in from every direction. Everywhere he looked the eerie white mist was creeping up on him. He spun around in circles watching it enclose him. He walked backwards watching the fog follow him like a sheep. He started to run as if to get away from the fog but it pursued him, infact now it seemed to have overtaken him, it was above him, below him to the left and right everywhere he looked the fog hung over him.

 

[marypops!]

wow

why is this person afraid of the fog?

 

[CrazyChik]

wow

why is this person afraid of the fog?

well im glad you got that impression
ok well hes on a spooky moor and night and then to add to it fog rolls in
wouldnt you be scared of the fog??


d you think it's ok for a Y8/Grade 7 ???

 

[marypops!]

yup

 

[CrazyChik]

yup

you sure george???
this gets marked and counts towards my final grade and my set next year. i'd rather you tell me if it was utter rubbish

 

[marypops!]

no it's good better then anything i could write

 

[CrazyChik]

your 2 years above me
and your a talented guy
i highly doubt it

 

[BabyPiglet]

Hello...everyone!!!

It's a beautiful snowy day!

 

[marypops!]

believe me i get stuck on things like these...

 

[Tiinkerbelle]

~random~.
It's just cold and cloudy here.

 

[BabyPiglet]

Hello Charmaine I am Dr.Roberts. It says here on your chart that last night you went into cardiac arrest becasue your side split open. How are you felling this lovely afternoon?

 

[CrazyChik]

lol

george if your still on when i finish i'll pm you the fi nished thing

 

[marypops!]

hello everyone

Who likes Expederest? or Cindensal?

 

[BabyPiglet]

uurrgghhh heres my start

The fog rolled in from every direction. Everywhere he looked the eerie white mist was creeping up on him. He spun around in circles watching it enclose him. He walked backwards watching the fog follow him like a sheep. He started to run as if to get away from the fog but it pursued him, infact now it seemed to have overtaken him, it was above him, below him to the left and right everywhere he looked the fog hung over him.

That's really great, it remids me of this old Sherlock Holmes movie...

Some constructive critisicm though you used He a little to much... but otheriwse VERY discritptive....

Really gooood!