Proof and editing of the ceremony! Assistance, por favor!

[MegKate]

I guess I did it right after all since no one had any suggestions.

 

[MegKate]

Now that I've posted it, does it seem really long or is that just me??

 

[HopefulDisneyBride]

My planner said to keep it to 20 minutes and that Rev. Jack was great about doing that. Why don't you try to read it out loud with pauses and see how long it is?